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::waiting on pins and needles in anticipation of the next chapter of this fabulous fanfic::

Like whoa....words simply cannot describe all of the emotions that flooded through me while I was reading this. The comedy, the suspense, the romance, the heart-ache...I love all of it and I am extremely anxious as to what will the final chapter be like. You have to continue, such a story must not go unfinished.

love your story! such depth!!! hope you update soon! keep on rocking!!! \m/

Phenomenal! This story is great, but I think its going to be the death of me. I started reading it and rfused to walk away until I was done with the 16 chapters that you have done. Unfortunately, it is now 5:30am and my alarm is set for 7. Oh well, it was well worth it. Thanks so much for sharing your stories.

Oiy. Good chapter. I liked it. I enjoyed the battle between Sasuke and the sound nin, and how Sasuke went stage two. As for if it has occured in the anime yet, the answer is no. So your okay for the color issue as of now. I really to look forward to seeing how this whole battle ends and Naruto's fate. Please get the next chapter out as soon as you can, until then, ja ne!

wow! way to go, Sasuke!
so? what about Naruto? where is he, anyway? what's going on? I'm relieved at least that Sasuke managed to get rid of those guys. what will happen next? what will he do? where will he go? please update soon!

Wah! so good! please keep up the wonderful job!

:: snickers :: "Nobu was dead before he could consider dodging." That's what we like to can Uchiha Rage... Or "BEEETCH! Don't you kill me man's best friend!" Complete with ghetto finger and head swivle. I really love this story, and the way you wrote the dynamics between the characters, especially Gaara and Naruto. They have one of the most awesome friendships in this story. The way you write Naruto is great as well. The complications and reality of this situation is rich. I'm pretty sure there are many who just want him and Sasuke to get together and live happily ever after in this story, but you make it clear that it's definatly not that simple. Great work. Keep it running.

Wow.....AMAZING STORY!! I love it. I think it's the best one that I've read. I think one of my major problems with some fan fictions I read is that the dialogue sounds fake, not like what the person would really say. And that tends to ruin stories for me because I can't really get into the story. But I didn't have that problem with this story. I hope you update soon, I'm waiting anxiously to see what happens next. I'm hoooping that you could end it in a way that leaves Naruto alive and happy but somehow it doesn't seem like the stories going that way. :'(

I think you got the colour right and I didn't find it confuisng to read at all. I thought it was very well written. As always, I look forward your next update.