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for Walking Corpse

by suomynonakun

person evvy
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
http://usera.imagecave.com/ishmeagol/Volume27CoverBig.jpg there see? XD Very good action chapter ^_^ I'm impressed!
person ghostninja85
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. I liked the OCs here. They were powerful and their abilities were very interesting.

I hope Hinata and Sasuke are OK. And I really want to find out what Naruto is doing.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person MeLaiya
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man your good, please hurry and update soon.
person Hitomi
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch 16)
*wobbles* You should have warnned about the major spoilers you just delivered. Really, that was quiet irresponsible.

Awsome chapter. Neji's fight scene was excellent; I didn't see any problems.
I loved how both Sasuke and Hinata were first concerned about how Naruto would be affected, before thinking about their own well being. So noble.^^

MORE^^

Until then,
Ja ne~
^_^
person lo
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this would be another agnsty whiney story, but it is not. THis is INCREDIBLE!!!! The development of story and character is great. And you are one of the few writters, who can write action scense and make them cool. You are an awsome writer, keep up the good work!!!
person me
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, i honestly believed that you couldn't top the 15th chapter's crazy awesome battle scene but apparently it gets more addicting as it advances *__* am so glad that you wrote sasuke in level 2, it's really such a big part of his character. i shall continue to check this page before my emails everyday to see if you've updated ^__^
person animegirl
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaa! an update! that was great, i love this story. your battle sceans are really somethin else. i can't wait to read more, keep up the amazing work and please give us another chap soon!
person Letta
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you've characterized the females. Especially Sakura. Usually they're portrayed as the bitchy type. It's very refreshing. This is a very well-written fic, but I'm getting kind of anxious. I can't help but hope that Naruto survives, though I don't know how. Maybe getting rid of the Kyuubi by sealing it in something else... Anyway, I'mlooking forward to seeing where this goes.
person jess
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god... poor hinata.... dun let anything bad happen to her!

this chapter is full of action... but... where is naruto?? i wanna see him!


person ally2002
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The anime hasn't quite reached that stage yet, but it is close. and if you look at naruto-kun.com they have color pictures of sasuke in level 2. just for your info. please hurry and update i want to know what happens to naruto.