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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really wonderful, thank you for giving us this! So many positive things to say--I especially like the naruto gaara relationship. Very satisfying on all levels. (One tiny point to note...gaara can't raise eyebrows he doesn't have, but also, more importantly, he never even seems to raise his brow-bones (especially not one at a time), because he doesn't tend to show any emotion except flat or rage). Regarding IC in general, this is quite a challange you have taken on! sasuke being theone to reach out, naruto being the fearful one. Whoa! But you are making it work, I still feel them as who they are (albeit older and wiser). I LOVE LOVE LOVE the major reversal/balance you worked out, where naruto's utter faith in sasuke releases the latter from Oro, and then so much later sasuke must take that same leap of faith thelp naruto break kyuubi's grip. nice move. hope you will keep sharing with us.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, it's really disappointing that you didnt include the lemon. The whole reason I decided to read this version too, was because I thought the M rated Yaoi one would include more than just a make out session. What you wrote only warranted a T rating. Can anyone say "false advertising"?
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, geez. <3333 I've read this before, and I'll read it again, and I guarantee you, I will cry every single time. "My Immortal" by Evanesence came on suring the last chapter, and I basically bawled my eyes out. You write the best Sasuke ever, seriously. :'D
Loved it, as usual. <3
Loved it, as usual. <3
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually read this one on FF.net but I still like the yaoi one... urgh you made me really cry this is a brilliant story and I hope you make more sasunarusasu stories....
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! You made me cry! *Sniff*
My internet went out during the last chapter, I almost died waiting for it to come back on so I could finish reading it!
It was fun to read, and sad and other stuff! I loved it, thank you for such a great story!
My internet went out during the last chapter, I almost died waiting for it to come back on so I could finish reading it!
It was fun to read, and sad and other stuff! I loved it, thank you for such a great story!
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this fic, and the ending was great.
You did a good job.
Thankyou.
You did a good job.
Thankyou.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, I wish you people would leave warning that this is a death fic(maybe you did? sorry). They always make me nauseous, then angry, then all choked up. Great story though..
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing, well-executed piece. Even though the ending is sad, it was a good fit with the tone of the fic. The storyline, fight scenes, as well your version of the Kyuubi-Naruto internal war were very interesting. I actually read this from start to finish with only a few breaks. Thank you for posting.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really can't decide whether or not I love or hate you right now...I have never, I repeat, NEVER, had a fanfiction make me cry, at all, let alone hard. I don't know if it's added on the fact that my real life is getting so fucked up right now that I finally broke down or you're just that badass of a writer. I hate that you made me fall so much in love with Naruto, only to have him die, I hate that I actually felt my damn heart rip into two, but most of all I hate how much I abso-fucking-lutely love this story. Really great job, now I really need to find something to cheer myself up before I spend the rest of the day bawling.
Ja,
Revine
Ja,
Revine
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there...
honestly, I loved your story. It has been the only one that made me cry like a little baby, I mean, I cried all the epilogue, half "of reunions" (poor jiraiya and tsunade TToTT), "of fears" and "of Sacrifices" (poor Sasuke TToTT). Your fanfic it's great, amazing. But... you forgot to said that it was a death fic!!!! TToTT my heart broke in pieces when my loved kitsune died (with kitzune i refer to Naruto). I'm gonna attribute some information mistakes (like Sakura's skills in battle [she's great like a battle nin thanks to her amazing strength, and I have to admit that she's the best kunoichi of the rookie nine], akatsuki's leader [belive me it's not Itachi] or abilities of Sasuke's sharingan [i mean! come on! he can enter into Naruto's mind with it]) to the date that you started to wrote this, 'cause I suppose that they weren't mention until Naruto shippuden.
But anyway that was great, my congratulations
See you,
Hoseki.
PS: I would like to be in touch, maybe talk about a translation, it depends of you (and of my free time T.T)
honestly, I loved your story. It has been the only one that made me cry like a little baby, I mean, I cried all the epilogue, half "of reunions" (poor jiraiya and tsunade TToTT), "of fears" and "of Sacrifices" (poor Sasuke TToTT). Your fanfic it's great, amazing. But... you forgot to said that it was a death fic!!!! TToTT my heart broke in pieces when my loved kitsune died (with kitzune i refer to Naruto). I'm gonna attribute some information mistakes (like Sakura's skills in battle [she's great like a battle nin thanks to her amazing strength, and I have to admit that she's the best kunoichi of the rookie nine], akatsuki's leader [belive me it's not Itachi] or abilities of Sasuke's sharingan [i mean! come on! he can enter into Naruto's mind with it]) to the date that you started to wrote this, 'cause I suppose that they weren't mention until Naruto shippuden.
But anyway that was great, my congratulations
See you,
Hoseki.
PS: I would like to be in touch, maybe talk about a translation, it depends of you (and of my free time T.T)