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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad i finally took the time to catch up on this!!! i've been so busy with things lately, i've been neglecting my reading!!! don't have much time now as it is, so just gonna say i love the story, keep it coming, can't wait for the update!!! *imagine there was an uber long raving review here instead* ^_________~
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am one of your new reviwers and I sat down and read all 15 chappies lol They were great and I am in dire need of a lemon between naruto and sasuke without that damned Kyuubi's
interfernce. Plaes I'm dying here. after the battle of course.
Loves arry
interfernce. Plaes I'm dying here. after the battle of course.
Loves arry
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! cacn't wait for the next update
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv ur fic! plz update as soon as possible...hehe, tenten and her art of concealing weapons will never cease to amaze and amuse me.....
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an exciting battle scene. YOu are a very talented writer, I can't wait to see more.
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh good chapter. Old Orochimaru just can't seem to keep his grubby paws out of Konoha. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and see how the battles progress. I really love this story. Please get the next chapter out as soon as you can. Till then, ja ne!
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my dream come true: a chapter-long battle scene O___O i doubt even a movie or an anime battle could have such an exhilarating effect on me, it was simply amazing ^___^ also, it was great that you added characterization for some of the invisible characters like hinata and tenten, thanks again for this story >.<
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You, you my dear are a wonderful all around writer. This is such a good tale. You have incorporated all of the characters beautifully, even the action scenes are fun to read through. You are a ver impressive writer.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UBER! It's very well written, intriguing, and angstily riveting ... *nods* the dark mood of the story is getting to me <_< >_> but i really like it! i hope there's a happy ending in sight ... it only seems right seeing all the angst they've been through you know? the story is balanced. it's got romance. it's got drama. it's got suspense/ it's definitely got plenty of action. it's just really good. i just wish i didn't have to read it with my hand over my face peeling my eyes open with my fingers. (it's late ... i'm sleepy ... reading addict.) but it was so good that even though i was looking to read a few pwp one shots ... i got drawn into the story. dammit lol. i really don't know what else to say other than it's really well written. it's just ... damn. xd; pretty good. it's got the naruto feel, but it's dark slashy naruto. ya know? and ya know ... i always interpretted sasuke's walking into the dark forest after the fight ... as him choosing his own path to power. (as opposed to going to ebil fugly snake bitch bastard.) i'm going to be sorely disappointed if he did go to orochimaru ... well, at least he didn't kill naruto. xd; i know what the girls are mad, but then he DIDN'T kill naruto. seeeee?!?!?! i mean he had the chance to ... but he walked away. i mean it would have been better if he had carried naruto back to konoha to marry him, but we don't always get what we want do we? =_= speaking of which ... HURRAH FOR NARUTO! he's finally hokage .... (ahah.... too bad he still needs to resolve the issue of the kyubi trying to take over his body to kill people, and also smex gaara raw ...) i've always seen naruto has a bottom ... have you seen how many times sasuke's saved his ass? i can see neijixnaru and gaaraxnaru (isn't gaara just uberly cool when he's kazekage???), but my favorite is definitely sasu x naru!!!! i'm obsessed. xd; i know. at any rate, i really enjoyed your story ... which is why i took the time to write a review. i liked it ... and i want you to write more dammit! *pauses* please. ^^; and um ... if you have a mailing list, i'd like to be added. eheh. i don't visit aff often. just occasionally when i can't seem to find stuff (like sasu x naru pairings and stuff or athrun x kira from GS / GSD) kk. gotta sleep now. don't want the gaara look. don't mind me eheh. i doubt i'll remember half the things i wrote. xd; *hugs and waves bye bye*