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Excellent fic - I can't wait to read the next one!

yyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssss an update, wahooooooo! i love you and i love this story, that chapter was totaly amazing, things are really starting to heat up, god i can't wait to see what happens next. keeo up the incredible writing and update as soon as humanly possible, ppppppppplllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ohhhh crap! That's *not* good! Not good at all! Meep! Oh, and I adore the kick-ass Hinata! ^^ That was just awesome... Jury duty, huh? Man that sucks... at least it was fairly short. But I'm really glad you're back and writing again! Post the next chapter soon? 'Cause that was a terrible place to leave it. *Glares half-heartedly* ...And if the snake-freak goes after Naruto again, there's gonna be sooooo much trouble... >< Crap.

Goodness... Gaara! what are you waiting for! unseal him! because they are defenetly going to need Naruto's chakra on this one. they've been fighting well until now, but will they all survive? they are all spreaded around the village. I think that will make them weak. (by the way, who would have thought that Hinata had that side of herself? she's really strong!) I hope Neji goes well with his fight. will Naruto alert the others of those other hundreds of ninjas with Orochimaru?
... I wonder...
please update soon!
I really wish to know!
great chapter!

Aghh, BEAUTIFUL! I can't WAIT for the next chapter!! I'm on the edge of my seat, dear <33

Your story is the best fan fic I have ever read. I must have read it at least a dozen times by now, and everytime I read I find something new I like about it. The way you have portrayed all the characters fits so well with the manga and anime, and your use of dialogue is fantastic. Your scenes are all very well thought out and nicely structured. I especially liked when Ino witnesses Naruto's memories. It felt as if the memory of Gaara and Naruto could have been taken right from the manga. Your use of detail is also very good as well as consistent. Since I've read it so often there are a few things I've picked up that you might want to fix, if you haven't done so already. In chapter two, Naruto addresses Ino by name, but she never introduced herself to him so that would be another thing for her to be suspicious about. In chapter 8 you wrote a line about shinobi never forming attatchments, but did so in present instead of past tense. In chapter 9 you say that the kunai flew by their target and thudded into him, but the target was naruto and the "him" was the other attacker. Also in chapter 9 you wrote "the cap obviously not on..." That's not necessary since you say right afterwards that sand is coming out of the gourd. In chapter 10 you have Sasuke "purposely striding" down the hospital hallway. I think you mean to say either purposefully or deliberately, and later on you say whickered man instead of whiskered man. In chapter 11 you say drug instead of dragged in reference to waking sakura and Ino. And I was wondering why Ino can't hear what Naruto and Sasuke are saying to each other in the memory of the battle. Is it because Naruto doesn't remember what they said? If he does it would make sense that she would hear it. In chapter 12 you wrote "everyone was assholes," but i think it's better if you say "everyone was an asshole" and later you wrote "the old team ten began" but i think the "began" was there by accident. Sorry, that was knit-picky. I can't wait for your next chapter!!! thank you so much for writing such a great story!

._________________. omfg this is one of the BEST fics I have ever read! >o< You must update soon! (XD Your priorities amuse me. And I do suppose school work has to come in there somewhere...) but... if you do not, I shall hunt you down and poke at you with a spork until you do!

I'm starting to chew my fingernails.Glad you updated.

Take as long as you need--this is one of my favorite stories. ^-^ I love the way this is written--really well. I can't stand not being able to write like you--you're awesome!
I love the romance between Naruto and Sasuke, and I usually don't support it because people warp it and kill their personalities but you keep it real and I salute that! ^u^ Yay! I'll try to keep up with you.
Oh, I wanna see more GaaNaru (if any) next chapter! I really support that. If it's not in your plans, 's ok. Anything with the two of them works for me, and it's almost a garentee they'll be working side by side next chapter. I just hope the horny demons don't cause any problems ...
OK, see you round AFF.N and FF.N! Ja!
--blue 1/2

wow, it seems that this war is going to be really interesting. so, how exactly is Naruto going to react when the seal is open? he will have to focus everything he gots to Orochimaru, right? if the fox wants to fight and destroy, why not him and the akatsuki members? but after that... will he be able to control himself? please keep going! I really want to read next chapter! It promises to be a great one!