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(Ch. 14)
Me like your priorities!!^^

Excellent chapter! Loved Sasuke's little burst of jealousy. A little cuteness in the middle of a while fuss.
I wonder how the story will end. Have a few optional endings in mind, but I do have one request from you; blow my mind. End this story with a bang.[not literally, of course] Don't make the ending too musy/angsty/known. Make it something unike. I think such an end will fit this incredible story perfectly. ^_^

Until teh next,
Ja ne~

I loved this chapter. I wonder what will happen to Naruto? Will he die in the battle or after...or maybe not at all. I really love the character dynamics that you have set up in this story. Of course it isn't helping that I was listening to a rather sad Nightwish song when reading this chapter. Made it all the more impending doomish. Please get the next chapter out as soon as you can. Until then, ja ne!

Wohoo, nother' chapterr, keep em coming <333 Nice authors note btw ^___^

WAAAIII, it's Iruka! There he is!! I see him!!

Interesting that things worked out that way--maybe we were on the same wavelength or maybe I'm enough of an Iruka fan to get upset when he's not somewhere I think he should be, especially in a story this good. And it just makes the story complete to give him a little cameo like that. Though I'd love to see more of him, I am appeased. ^_~

I know what you mean about the priorities thing . . . I'm not afraid of dying, but I'm afraid of dying before I finish everything I've started. ^_^;; Is that wrong . . .?


~LS

OMG, updateee updatteee!!! Holy COWW (evil moo at you)
You have to update. This fic if so great.
Long chapters. Many chapters.Written so well.
Its a beautiful work of art! SO PLEASE PLEASE UPDATEE
WAIIIH *CLINGS* you have toooo. Unlike o-others!
xo rhichan xo

*reaches out to the next chapter that's not there* *huggles sasuke* he saved the day again, now if only he can convince naruto to stop with the willing-death deal T__T but then again, maybe the akatsuki will serve as distraction and the whole ordeal will be put off. i shall remain right here and continue to hope against naruto's death. seriously though, don't kill naruto. please T__T

I started reading your story on Fanfiction until I got to chapter four. So i would like to thank you for two things. Onefor writing this awesome story and two for writing one version as a yaoi. if you need any assistence please contact me.

Ne? you haven't finish it! *recovers from drop dead state*
I was sure you had...well, whatever. really nice story there.
good to see some narutoXgaara cream fluff *grin*
would really hope for a really cute ending with Naruto dying in Sasukes arms...
Yeah, I know... Drama queen no; one! but it's really nice to cry because of a
story...feel nice *totall wierdo*

Very good, it's rare to see the Kyubbi addressed in this fashion and narrowed down to the two paths that could be taken the destruction of Kyubbi by killing Naruto. You address this issue well and tell a I don't want to say sweet or lovely romance cause it's not it has a depth to it that rings. It's a good story, and I enjoy reading it.

kee ... it's too bad the stupid close-minded people at FF.N won't even consider coming here to read this--I like this version better. The passion that you leave out of the story on FF.N is just too good to miss. It's like skipping half of an entire chapter, and then you don't fully appreciate the author's work. What am I babbling about--I just like it for the Gaa/Naru ... =] I also like the way you're developing ero-sennin into the story, his 'fight' with Sasuke was interesting back and forth before Naruto cut it off. Good use of character. Thanks for re-directing me here! Gomen for the long review--be seeing you on FF.N and AFF.N!