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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
coolsa.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arghhhhh......Need more story....It is good though. I liked the scene between Iruka and Naruto. Are the Sand Sibs still in Konoha and if they are will they help against Akatsuki?
Please update soon.
Please update soon.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was such a great chapter, i can't wait to read what happens next. i'm so glad sasuke showed up in time to save naruto, i swear to god my heart almost stopped when i thought it was in end for him. damn you write so well, i love this story, keep up the amazing work!!!!!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....If naruto's gonna die (*tries not to die as welll*) .....THEN HE AND SASUKE BETTER HAVE SEX AT LEAST ONCE BEFORE HE GOES!!!! XD XD XD;;;; *sob*
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS A VERY EXCITING STORY I LOVE WHAT YOU DID TO NARUTO HAIR I CAN JUST IMAGINE HIM WITH RED HAIR AND
LET ME TELL U THAT IS A VERY SEXY LOOK.
I REALLY HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON......SO UPDATE SOOON OKAAAAAAAAAAAAY
UNTIL NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!!!!!!!!!
LET ME TELL U THAT IS A VERY SEXY LOOK.
I REALLY HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON......SO UPDATE SOOON OKAAAAAAAAAAAAY
UNTIL NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!!!!!!!!!
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well.. i m really touched by naruto's friends' reaction on hearing that Kyuibi was sealed within him...
this chapter is great!
but please dont kill naruto off.. let him be with sasuke!
this chapter is great!
but please dont kill naruto off.. let him be with sasuke!
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story the other day and have gleefully gone through all twelve chapters in probably eight hours while downloading AMVs. The characterizations are great and your battle descriptions are spectacular and it definitely has me saying, "Dear Lord, what's going to happen NEXT to these poor people?!"
However, I have one question. Where the hell is Iruka during all of this? I only remember seeing him mentioned once at the beginning of the story. While I realize he's not an integral part of the story, he's still very important to Naruto and cares about him a lot and I can't imagine with the village grapevine that he hasn't at least HEARD that Naruto is still alive, especially since children are such blabbermouths. If it were me, I don't think ten years would keep me from living in muted denial--I'd be asking questions.
Well, anyway, I suppose you have your reasons or whatever; I just thought I'd mention it, since nobody else seems to have bothered. Keep writing, please!!
~LS
However, I have one question. Where the hell is Iruka during all of this? I only remember seeing him mentioned once at the beginning of the story. While I realize he's not an integral part of the story, he's still very important to Naruto and cares about him a lot and I can't imagine with the village grapevine that he hasn't at least HEARD that Naruto is still alive, especially since children are such blabbermouths. If it were me, I don't think ten years would keep me from living in muted denial--I'd be asking questions.
Well, anyway, I suppose you have your reasons or whatever; I just thought I'd mention it, since nobody else seems to have bothered. Keep writing, please!!
~LS
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i love this story!!!!! u r soo talanted!!!!!!! omg poor naruto! wahhhh...ToT
this story is soo good it has everythin in it. romance, action, angst. this is like the perfect pic...well to me at least. hope u update soon!
this story is soo good it has everythin in it. romance, action, angst. this is like the perfect pic...well to me at least. hope u update soon!
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was so fscking sad!!! omg omg! *sobs* with the whole...dying.. and sasuke.... then ...a-and jiraiya? *begins foaming at the mouth* omg sensory overload... please tell me theres gonna be a happy ending! please please please!!! update fast! i muuuust know what haaaaapeeeeeens!
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch.12) Made me bawll like a baby.
Can't wait to see what happens next. I really hope they find another solution.
I god, not another deth-fic. My poor fangirl heart is sufforing greatly. Well... at least it's worth it.
Love your writing style to death. And the quote was wonderfuly in place. Dragonheart rules.
Until teh next time,
Ja ne~
Can't wait to see what happens next. I really hope they find another solution.
I god, not another deth-fic. My poor fangirl heart is sufforing greatly. Well... at least it's worth it.
Love your writing style to death. And the quote was wonderfuly in place. Dragonheart rules.
Until teh next time,
Ja ne~