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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Crazy chapter. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't kill Naruto!
Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! This was an awesome chapter! Yay for more SasuNaru and love the other's reactions to Naruto being the Kyubi holder. But please, don't kill Naruto!
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! is naru-chan actually gonna die??????????? NOOOOOOO!!! *cries and after two seconds dries saliva tears of her face* anyways..... the way the guys treated naru after finding out he was the kyubis container was so sweet!!! and kiba is such a dork hehehe asking about the hair with such a serious face.... this is a great fic!! please update soon cant wait for next chappy!!!! =^o^=
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was brilliant really brilliant,Of course i, being total one track ,am sobbing over the lack of smex,uhhh if indeed you can not do the scene (i think you could,you led in really well ! but, whatever ,your trip right?)How about someone else ghosting it? Anyway your writing is really exciting and the ideas/plot are exceptional.Good stuff.
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Great chapter. It reminded me of another story where Sasuke killed Naruto for the same reason. The fics have many differences, though. :)
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, this is GOOD. I like it a little better than the one on FF.N because it's straight what you wrote--not edited for the kiddies. I really enjoyed the scene where you explained the whole demon attraction thing to Sasuke. I can't write smut either, so it's ok that you left it out. I think it's a good thing that Kyuubi took over and tried to kill Sasuke--maybe that'll wake them both up to the fact that their relationship won't. work.
Anyway, sorry if this won't work w/ your story, but I really, really love Gaa/Naru. That's just me. And all this straggling between Sasuke and Naruto is sweet, but it's gonna start draggin ... it's good that you got some action in between them, don't get me wrong--it's just that their little back-and-forth-and-back-again is getting old. :) long review! ja ne.
--blue 1/2
Anyway, sorry if this won't work w/ your story, but I really, really love Gaa/Naru. That's just me. And all this straggling between Sasuke and Naruto is sweet, but it's gonna start draggin ... it's good that you got some action in between them, don't get me wrong--it's just that their little back-and-forth-and-back-again is getting old. :) long review! ja ne.
--blue 1/2
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you have to update soon....what happens to sasuke...does he go after Naruto or does he distrust him forever more??
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* don't make naruto leave again!! T__________T i just hope sasuke doesn't remember the entire night at all when he wakes up..it'd make everything a lot easier ^^; i'm gonna poke him with fork if he blames the real naruto *does the arrogant face*
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! Not only do Naruto and Sasuke do the nasty, but there's some NaruGaa lovin' as well. I am satisfied.
Happy ending seems sadly impossible. ;_;
Thought the flashback with Naruto trying not to sleep was adorable.
--Ruby
Happy ending seems sadly impossible. ;_;
Thought the flashback with Naruto trying not to sleep was adorable.
--Ruby
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome. But of course it's ALWAYS awsome! ^^