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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! but crap, now hes gonna leave again isn't he? aw man... but thanks for updating so fast! please keep up the awesome work!
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i see a problem!!!
first you mention that Naruto is only wearing black pants when he first starts molesting Gaara, but then you have gaara lift up naruto's shirt to do the seal. Other then that i comend you on another wonderfull chapter and now threaten you with bodly harm in order to have the next chapter out asap!
first you mention that Naruto is only wearing black pants when he first starts molesting Gaara, but then you have gaara lift up naruto's shirt to do the seal. Other then that i comend you on another wonderfull chapter and now threaten you with bodly harm in order to have the next chapter out asap!
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 11)
It's okay, honey, the half-lemon was good enough.^^
Wonderful chapter! But I would have liked to see a little more suprised reaction or pain to the seal. it seemed a little lacking, if you catch my drift.
Really amazing chapter! My favorite part has to be when Kyuubi put on a pair of pants! XDD At least he's mannered! XDDD
Hope you get aorund to updating soon!
Ja ne~
It's okay, honey, the half-lemon was good enough.^^
Wonderful chapter! But I would have liked to see a little more suprised reaction or pain to the seal. it seemed a little lacking, if you catch my drift.
Really amazing chapter! My favorite part has to be when Kyuubi put on a pair of pants! XDD At least he's mannered! XDDD
Hope you get aorund to updating soon!
Ja ne~
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. Naruto certainly got a lot of action that night ;) what with the smexing of the Uchiha and the Gaara molestation there. This fic kicks so much ass. Your writing style is just so beautiful, and the plot is just perfect. I really like how you balance the action with all the drama. And my god, the *drama*. I'm loving it so much. You are probably one of the rare naruto-writers who are talented and consistent (content AND time-wise). This is what I look forward in my week :) Thanks for all the work. That chapter was hot ;)
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, damn, why does things always turn out so bad for Naruto...?! (cries) Update...
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it took me quite a while to spot the review button XD just wanted you to know that there's yet another soul over here waiting desperately for every new chapter ^__^ *awaits the next one just as eagerly*
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
T.T dammit... make some more!! Please! lol I love this story!
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<3333333333 OMG I can't wait for the next chapter. Yes, Sasuke and Naruto are long overdue for a "talk." ;P
*goes back to spazzing over 245*
*goes back to spazzing over 245*
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a totally exciting story! It's really very great and enjoyable.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 10)
WONDERFUL CHAPTER. Not my best most efficent review, but it summs in up nicely.
I like the co-dependanet relationship between Garaa and Naruto; even if it helps the demons and not their holders. And besides, some extra angst never hurt anybody, ne?^^
Update soon please!^^
Ja ne~
WONDERFUL CHAPTER. Not my best most efficent review, but it summs in up nicely.
I like the co-dependanet relationship between Garaa and Naruto; even if it helps the demons and not their holders. And besides, some extra angst never hurt anybody, ne?^^
Update soon please!^^
Ja ne~