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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Those last few chapters really killed me...I'm still crying like a baby as I write this. It is an amazing work and I am very glad that I had a chance to read it.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh my god that story was awesome. you have TALENT! i seriously had tears in my eyes as i read the end of "of sacrifices and the whole of the epilogue. congratulation you made a teenage boy cry.... but its a good thing :)
i hope you write another long naruto fic. pretty please :3
farewell i hope to read you again!
i hope you write another long naruto fic. pretty please :3
farewell i hope to read you again!
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...That was so sad.
But I don't think I could've forgiven you if you wrote it any other way. XD
Your writing style is amazing, and I hope to read more of it in the future.
But I don't think I could've forgiven you if you wrote it any other way. XD
Your writing style is amazing, and I hope to read more of it in the future.
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this story since yesterday, and this morning I wanted to finish it before going to work. I think I may need to redo my makeup. I can't stop crying >.<
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hello i think this is my first time commenting on this story thats just the way i am when a story is finished i wait tell the end so here i go
ok first things first i hate you! you KILLED NARUTO have you lost your mind second i there has only been 3 stories that has ever made me cry and yes yours did when naruto told sasuke that he wanted him to do it i was bawling for that whole conversation and then when sasuke did actually kill him i was crying again there were a few other spots that made me cry as will so all in all its was a sad one okay so i dont hate you i understand why you killed him ok but still i love naruto and hate to see sasuke kill him.
before i forget what did henata have
ok first things first i hate you! you KILLED NARUTO have you lost your mind second i there has only been 3 stories that has ever made me cry and yes yours did when naruto told sasuke that he wanted him to do it i was bawling for that whole conversation and then when sasuke did actually kill him i was crying again there were a few other spots that made me cry as will so all in all its was a sad one okay so i dont hate you i understand why you killed him ok but still i love naruto and hate to see sasuke kill him.
before i forget what did henata have
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was such an incredible story.. i really hope you lend us more of your creative skills with another story :)
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've never read something like this........it is just...amazing(actually more than that)
anyway, thank you for writing this
anyway, thank you for writing this
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I CAN'T believe this.
You made me cry again. T.T This story is really something.
This version was even better. Of course, it's much harder to write boy-boy relationship without it being a yaoi - but I felt as though this version was the original one and the nonyaoi was the altered one. For example, I think that when Naruto burnt down Sasuke's house, Kyuubi taking over because Naruto had fallen asleep was much better than the idea that Kyuubi was trying to prove a point and actually taking control when Naruto was awake. Sure, that way it was much scarier - I realised that once the fuuin would be gone, Kyuubi would instantly take over, while I didn't have this feeling during reading the yaoi version.
But this way, it was more beautiful. Since they became lovers, their goodbye was even much more sad - this was the one and only time Sasuke actually loved, and him loosing him like this - it was even worse. I think that's why you managed to make me cry a second time.
Also, I don't remember those 4 lines before Naruto's death inserted in the nonyaoi version - whether they were there or not, it was kinda new for me, and made things even MORE sad (if that is possible).
I don't think I'll read another fanfic for a day (which is a big thing since I read them day and night); I'll go listen to some sad music (maybe Fullmetal Alchemist OST, Brothers will do the job) and brood. Maybe I'll even find myself some chocolate.
Thank you for this wonderful experience your fanfic gave me.
MikoKriszty
You made me cry again. T.T This story is really something.
This version was even better. Of course, it's much harder to write boy-boy relationship without it being a yaoi - but I felt as though this version was the original one and the nonyaoi was the altered one. For example, I think that when Naruto burnt down Sasuke's house, Kyuubi taking over because Naruto had fallen asleep was much better than the idea that Kyuubi was trying to prove a point and actually taking control when Naruto was awake. Sure, that way it was much scarier - I realised that once the fuuin would be gone, Kyuubi would instantly take over, while I didn't have this feeling during reading the yaoi version.
But this way, it was more beautiful. Since they became lovers, their goodbye was even much more sad - this was the one and only time Sasuke actually loved, and him loosing him like this - it was even worse. I think that's why you managed to make me cry a second time.
Also, I don't remember those 4 lines before Naruto's death inserted in the nonyaoi version - whether they were there or not, it was kinda new for me, and made things even MORE sad (if that is possible).
I don't think I'll read another fanfic for a day (which is a big thing since I read them day and night); I'll go listen to some sad music (maybe Fullmetal Alchemist OST, Brothers will do the job) and brood. Maybe I'll even find myself some chocolate.
Thank you for this wonderful experience your fanfic gave me.
MikoKriszty
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i dont get it what way did hey look at shikamaru ????????????????????
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Author,
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=38. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=38. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php