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for Walking Corpse

by suomynonakun

person Emily
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I am so pressed for time so this review will have to be short. I love the details in this chapter and just the overall effect it has on the reader (Me). It is well written with great grammar, nice word choice, and some excellet scenes as well. It was overall the best chapter you have written so far and I hope for you to continue it soon. Great work and until next time!
Emily

P.S. Sorry again that it's so short but I have no time! Blame having to pick up sister! I love your work!
person kayoko
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grabs a pen and find a wall*
"kayoko was here and liked the story. you rock!"

^_^ thank you for writing such a great story.
person kat8cha
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought Naru-chan said Sasuke was the only one allowed to do things to his ass! You lied!!! ~points and scowls~ Delightful interaction between Naruto and Gaara, and I loved the 'demons attraction to each other', very amusing. Pleasent images (I'm a Gaa/Naru fan, so sue me). Still, Sasuke is really gonna be pissed about this! And I cannot wait to see the blow up! Man am I enjoying this fic!!!
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah! Gaara's here! *begins waving a flag stating Gaara is the greatest* i love this story! poor naruto. now he has to go back and see sasuke again. oh! and what will sasuke's reaction from seeing Gaara be? Will he get jealous over the friendly relationship between naruto and gaara or will he be too focused, on getting naruto to stay in konoha, to care? i can see him acting all posessive about naruto easily. anyway, lovely work. cant wait for the next chapter.
person hogo-chan
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! hurrah for gaara! tee hee! now he'll make naruto go back to konoha! but... gah, theres gonna be conflict between gaara and sasuke over naruto right? gah! why cant everything just be all happy go lucky and junkity junk like that! well, keep up the good work! i love you forever for writing this fic! update fast please!
person animegirl
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD i love this story!!!! that was an amazing and totally great chapter. please, for the love of god update as soon as possible!!!!!! MUST HAVE MORE. i love the fact that you put gaara and the others in the story, makes it even better that gaara is nice and protective of naruto, it's soooo cute! of course still wanting sasuke/naruto action but i love it that naruto and the sand sibilings are friends. this could also make the plot very interesting since the two demons are attracted to each other but at the same time naruto and sasuke are attracted to each other as well. this is great, such an intresting story development. i can't wait to read what happens next. if you don't update soon i swear to god i'll hunt you down and make you!bwwahhhahahaha *laughs evily and smiles* good luck
person Yami Jay
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is sssssssssoooooooooo stubborn.
person Ruby Lee
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gaara. [heart] Love for Gaara. Love for the Gaara/Naruto/Demon love.

Love for relaying messages by frog.

--Ruby
person jai
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic. Thank you for updating. I'm not one to write long winded reviews, but the exchange between Sasuke and Naruto at the beginning of the chapter was one of the FUNNIEST things ever! I was laughing so much.
And then later on, Gaara, another fave character of mine, shows up to help. That just rocks. I don't know what else to say, keep it up! :)
person Alexandria Faith
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always get so excited when I come home and see another chapter up, it just makes my day! I love how you've included Gaara and his sibings. I like the relationship you've created between the four of them. I just wanted to leave a quick note telling you how much I love your fic and I can't wait for the next chapter!