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for Walking Corpse

by suomynonakun

person RavenWings
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for party crashing! *grins* I love that Gaara and Naruto are friends. And that their respective demons are attracted to each other is amusing as hell... *snickers* Those poor boys. *Bounces* Write more soon, please! I love this story!
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Gaara and his siblings. It was a pleasant surprise. :D

The scene with the frog was really funny. Pop. Pop. Pop. Hehehe.



schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
arrrrrrgh, sexy Gaara!~!!! Woooooot, I think I'm going to pass out! Whhhhheeee, though this is a SasuNaru fic, can ya add in a bit of GaarNaru for the fun of things, heh heh...UPDATE!
person Ezj
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter ^_^
person Hitomi
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 9)

AMAZING!! Wonderful increadible chapter!
Really well written, and the hinting between Gaara and Naruto was so in place.


Full of aplatonic love for you and your writings,
And until the next wonderful update,
Ja ne~
person FlameArchanist
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! *glomphs her panda eyed lunatic* This just makes me like the story more!
person hitobito
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm... what's going on in here? the demons atract each other? what the hell? haha! poor guys, I wish them luck. and what about Sasuke? what will he say when he sees Naruto return once more? oh! poor kid... well, he is not a kid anymore, but who cares! I'm just wondering what is going through Naruto's mind right now. being forced to go back to the place he fled moments ago... sheesh, I hope he is not suicidal right now.
nice chapter!
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The overall story is quite well done. The only thing I had a huge fit over was the high possibility that sasuke and naruto are turning gay. Why the hell would you do that to them?! Because there is a 99 percent chance that that would and should never happen in fanfiction and in the actual series. Deducting huge points for that, I would give it a 2 or 3 out of 5.
person Teaspoon
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and if you truly meant about making this a long one, then I can't wait to read the following entries. Good Stuff! I think the changes that are happening with Naruto make sense. However if you are planning to eventually turn this into a death fic..sniff... leave a warning... I can't handle losing an important character out of the blue. Keep up the good work!!!!
person Night_Walker
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok u hafta update soon or i will find where u live and make u update!!!!!! I really wanna know wut's going to happen!!!!!!
So update sooon!!!!!!...............plz?