rate_review Reviews

great story so far!

one thing, when you wrote, "their curiosity peaked even further", I believe you meant piqued instead of peaked. ^^

waahh, oh gawd oh gawd, it just gets more interesting as things proceeds. and the suspense, the suspense is killing me. goodness, you're making me repeating my words. lol. please update soon. fast. next second. now. ONEGAI!

I looooooove yoooouuuu!<3 This is a really well written story thinking about regret of past actions, and the memories that could haunt the living...ok.. what I said was weird but this really good! And I really like SasuNaru pairings! Make sure Naru-himesama is an uke ok?!?!

Y

Hey. Just giving you your due as a writer. Your story had an element that I was attracted to, instantly, and without any sort of room for argument.

All of the characters were reasonably close to canon, while at the same time making room for new-found maturity, and so on.

One of the main points, I must admit, is that you didn't make Naruto and Sasuke simply meet after a few years of being apart and then tumble into bed with eachother, moaning "Oh, [insert name here] I have loved you for so long!" in a high falcetto.

You earned my respect for that. But enough of the cool, appraising evaluatiuon.

LEIK, OMG, I SOOOOO LIKED YOUR STORRRRRY!!!!!11!11oneone!

There we go. Rock on.

N.

yes, that was amazing, you've got to update as soon as possible, i need to know what happens next!!!! this is sooooooo good, i love this story. your the best, coming up with such an interesting plot. you had me going for a sec, i thought naruto was almost taken by that snake bastard, are the others going to find out that it's naruto or what? keep it up, i can't wait to read more.

great plot. i like the last sentence sakura said cuz it left a cliff-hanging very well. now everyone's gonna guess who can use Kage Bunshin no Jutsu ^^ and Orochimaru ain't no idiot too, but maybe i've missed it; i simply didn't see the sentence dat says naruto uses kage bunshin b4 talking to Lee. Orochimaru sucks!! *ahem* Merry Christmas and i luv ur plot ^^

hullo!!! i am so embarassed! i was your first reviewer and i took this long to review again. >__<

but anyway i love the way that the story is going. i like what you've done to naruto's appearance. i think the red highlights are a good look for him. i also liked the way that when shika figured out that it was naruto at sasuke's that he rushed over to go see him. the rest of the group probably neva saw shika move so fast. i'm so happy that shika is a character in the story even if he is a minor one. (loves herself some shikamaru) and the tension between sasuke and naruto! ^___^ nice to see that i was right about this being a very interesting fic. Now i wonder if every1 else will figure out that naruto's there b/c of the kage bunshin or will they still be kept in the dark? Very much looking foward to the next chapter, so unil then merry christmas if you celebrate it and happy new year to ya if you dont update before then.

Devious Lil Devil

omg, it's just getting to the good part... I need more! *drools* ^__^

This is really good so far! I can't wait to read more.