rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy reading this story so far. It is really interesting.

I came across your story a few months ago on Fanfiction.net, after it had already been completed, and I became hooked with the ideas it portrayed instantly. I'll admit that, while never trying to be rude, I have a tendency to skip over Author Note's and hadn't come across this version of your story until tonight. I had always thought there was a certain connection in the non-romantic version that spoke of something between Sasuke and Naruto, and had always somewhat imagined them as more of a couple than friends. I'm mainly writing this because I felt the need to tell you just how much I enjoyed both versions of your story. I, unwillingly, cry everytime I read it, which is quite often. I have, many times over, given my friends a link to the first chapter and have found each to become similarily taken away by the plot.
I know this is probably an insignificant review amonst your many others and probably writen fairly weakly, but I don't feel the need nor want to review often. I try to follow my instincts.
I hope to read more of your works in the future and will be keeping an eye out.
--Megan E. Lark

good story, but i wanted naru to be with hina....*sobs* oh well. maybe you could do a nice long story with that apiring next time? :). good stuff though. cant wait to see your next fic. btw, if you ever need a beta reader dont hesitate to ask. my email is Nameramthgin@hotmail.com

*sniffles and slowly starts crying* I had to force myself to read the last chapter, its so sad,but so good at the same time

ive been reading your story since it first came out, and all i can say is wow... this is the second fanfic that has made me cry (which is very hard to do, mind you). i love the whole entire story line, and every chapter left me on the edge of my seat. the only thing that i see worth criting is the ending. it seemed rushed, i would have thought you would have gone over what happened right after kyubi got released. But beggers cant be choosers... good job.



ps- ignore all these people who flame about it being sasunaru... its quite obvious what it will be because you state the pairing in the description.

that was a sad...T.T made me wanna cry. also the part in the epilogue at the end about how naruto lives through sasuke and sasuke for naruto i really liked it. you writters always have a kewl way of ending your stories. well anywho just wanted to say woow awesome and hope to catch another one of your stories

ja ne see you on the flip side

The last chapter - long awaited and anticipated - was wonderful.

Just when I gey into the damn story people have to write that the main effing character gets raped!!!! Nice way to ruin a story. Its just sicking.

Ok, I don't know if you remember me, but I've just reviewed for this same fic at ff.net. After that I gave the link to a friend of mine, and she said something about the yaoi version being better... and I didn't even know that was a yaoi version (I did read the notes, but somehow that was just passed me by).

Sooo, I came here and read the yaoi version, so I could compare.

And, in the end, I agree with my friend, the yaoi version truly is better than the ff.net version... I don't know how to say this (and please don't get me wrong), but I thought that this version was much more complete and honest.

And just for the record, this is really one of the bet fanfictions I've ever read. Yaoi or not. Besides, it's one of the few things that even if I know the ending, I still keep crying whenever I read it again XD

Thank you again for sharing your work.

Best wishes o/

I'm so bawling! its so sad!