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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh.. -wipes away tears-
WAHHH!! That was so sad...And very dramatic, you did a wonderful job on that last chapter!!! -NEEDS MORE- ;x You're so awesome!
WAHHH!! That was so sad...And very dramatic, you did a wonderful job on that last chapter!!! -NEEDS MORE- ;x You're so awesome!
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That last chapter you added, 19, brought tears to my ears. It was terribly beautiful and Sasuke was so sweet in his own growly way. Keep going and finish it as strong as it has been through it all.
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whines*
I still want to hear the rest of this story...!
I still want to hear the rest of this story...!
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon ;________________;
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god...
Oh my god...
I read the other version already and still......
Oh my god!
It's just....It's so.....oh god....
You have to update.
At the end, I relived the 3rd chapter, when they retold Naruto saving Sasuke and they fell to the ground. I remembered how Sasuke cradled Naruto in his arms and kept repeating "Gomen Nasai" until they had to put him to sleep to make him let go....
I remembered the words Naruto told Sasuke just before that, and when Kyuubi nearly took over during the battle when Naruto was poisoned and Sasuke repeated those words to Naruto.
I remembered everything and it was so sad. I remember that I told Onee-chan 1 about it and she didn't care that Naruto was dead. I remembered how close I came to crying when I read the other version.
This is all to much and even as I sit here I still see Sasuke holding Naruto in his arms and crying, hereing that "Gomen Nasai" all over again and knowing that Sasuke already blamed Naruto's first 'death' on himself. I wonder what is to come and how anything can be happy ever again, if Gaara is alive, and if anyone can go back to life and smile after so much sadness has happened.
(Whoa, where does this come from? I'm not usually this poetic!)
Oh my god...
I read the other version already and still......
Oh my god!
It's just....It's so.....oh god....
You have to update.
At the end, I relived the 3rd chapter, when they retold Naruto saving Sasuke and they fell to the ground. I remembered how Sasuke cradled Naruto in his arms and kept repeating "Gomen Nasai" until they had to put him to sleep to make him let go....
I remembered the words Naruto told Sasuke just before that, and when Kyuubi nearly took over during the battle when Naruto was poisoned and Sasuke repeated those words to Naruto.
I remembered everything and it was so sad. I remember that I told Onee-chan 1 about it and she didn't care that Naruto was dead. I remembered how close I came to crying when I read the other version.
This is all to much and even as I sit here I still see Sasuke holding Naruto in his arms and crying, hereing that "Gomen Nasai" all over again and knowing that Sasuke already blamed Naruto's first 'death' on himself. I wonder what is to come and how anything can be happy ever again, if Gaara is alive, and if anyone can go back to life and smile after so much sadness has happened.
(Whoa, where does this come from? I'm not usually this poetic!)
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU MADE ME CRY!!! *WAAAAHHH!!!* That can't be the end of Naruto! Naru-chan!!
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story so far! You write the characters so well! Omg... It's really goooood.
I've spent all day trying to catch up with this and only have one more chapter to go. The plot's awesome and the fight scenes are really well done! I really envy you, I have so much trouble with battles!
Anyways, awesome job so far, I love it!
On to the next chap!
I've spent all day trying to catch up with this and only have one more chapter to go. The plot's awesome and the fight scenes are really well done! I really envy you, I have so much trouble with battles!
Anyways, awesome job so far, I love it!
On to the next chap!
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O. M. G. IT's so sad! so tragic! dear god, tell me you at least have an epilouge to tie everything up nicely? That's too awful of a note to end on! please, i -beg- of you, write more! *gives best puppy-dog eyes possible*
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOUR SO MEAAAAAAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :'( This is gonna be like the Saikano episode all over again. That was just so sad and and and just mean and and I'm gonna go and cry now. I've read other stories where the main characters die, but only one has ever gotten to me like this. You know your story was actually the first truly quality fanfiction I read and what really got into the fanficiton. Yea, so I guess needless to say I love your story, it's so well written despite YOUR KILLING NARUTO!!!!!:'( YOUR SO MEAAAAAAAAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyways, I'm gonna go cry myself to sleep now. I'm hoping that in the next chapter Naruto will magically come back to life, but I doubt it so I hope at least Sasuke will die too and they'll get to live happily ever after in the after life.
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March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's... it? That's the end? Jiraiya dies, Naruto dies, and Sasuke's as good as dead? That's how it ends? I... think I'm gonna go cry now...