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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic. I found it last night and read the entire thing straight through. Do you know how many words it currently is?
I really enjoy the switching between POV, I like seeing what's going on in each character's head even though no one in the fic can do so. I thought the lack of narration would bother me, but it's actually much better having it narrated through the characters' eyes.
I love your Naruto. First, I love his reaction to Sasuke. Having been alone for so long, and finally finding Sasuke, losing him, and then having him yet again, would definitely cause him to have a horrible breakdown if anything happened to Sasuke. Naruto is also totally cuddly. Second, I thought his merging with Kyuubi was written really well. His fucked-up, desperate thinking when Kyuubi was mostly controlling his thoughts was a nice look into his psychology. Also, Naruto castrating the fox was absolutely hilarious.
I think Sasuke (prior to his fall, obviously) is a bit OOC. I guess he's just too lovey-dovey and not enough of an asshole for me. This is just my opinion, though. I think he needs more Sasuke-esque comments when they're being affectionate. Although the way their relationship starts, with the sleeping together, is insanely cute.
Congratulations, you have managed to write a character that I hate almost as much as I hated Rita Skeeter when reading the 4th book for the first time. (I love her now) Junichiro is /such/ a bastard. I hope they tie him up and let small birds peck at his skin forever. Because...you know...that was just the first thing that came to mind.
GAH, I hope Sasuke gets his memories back really soon. Although it's going to be so painful for him to not have the Sharingan, even if he regains his eyesight. How can an Uchiha (at least one who's already developed it and relies on it) live without it?
Boys making out in bathtubs. Forever hot.
Please update soon!
I really enjoy the switching between POV, I like seeing what's going on in each character's head even though no one in the fic can do so. I thought the lack of narration would bother me, but it's actually much better having it narrated through the characters' eyes.
I love your Naruto. First, I love his reaction to Sasuke. Having been alone for so long, and finally finding Sasuke, losing him, and then having him yet again, would definitely cause him to have a horrible breakdown if anything happened to Sasuke. Naruto is also totally cuddly. Second, I thought his merging with Kyuubi was written really well. His fucked-up, desperate thinking when Kyuubi was mostly controlling his thoughts was a nice look into his psychology. Also, Naruto castrating the fox was absolutely hilarious.
I think Sasuke (prior to his fall, obviously) is a bit OOC. I guess he's just too lovey-dovey and not enough of an asshole for me. This is just my opinion, though. I think he needs more Sasuke-esque comments when they're being affectionate. Although the way their relationship starts, with the sleeping together, is insanely cute.
Congratulations, you have managed to write a character that I hate almost as much as I hated Rita Skeeter when reading the 4th book for the first time. (I love her now) Junichiro is /such/ a bastard. I hope they tie him up and let small birds peck at his skin forever. Because...you know...that was just the first thing that came to mind.
GAH, I hope Sasuke gets his memories back really soon. Although it's going to be so painful for him to not have the Sharingan, even if he regains his eyesight. How can an Uchiha (at least one who's already developed it and relies on it) live without it?
Boys making out in bathtubs. Forever hot.
Please update soon!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was so wonderful I was about to cry. I hope everything works out for my favorite yaoi couple NaruSasu. I loved the long chapters and how you guys explained Naruto and Sasuke's thoughts. I couldn't bring myself to stop reading until there was no more to read. *Cries* It was so beatiful. Anyways, I loved it so much I added it to my recommendations list.
Well excellent job on your writings, hope this continues and becomes even more awesome
Enma
p.s. I'M RIGHT HERE CHEERING SASUKE AND NARUTO! *runs away crying wishing that the relationship goes well*
Well excellent job on your writings, hope this continues and becomes even more awesome
Enma
p.s. I'M RIGHT HERE CHEERING SASUKE AND NARUTO! *runs away crying wishing that the relationship goes well*
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... ;__; Oh, Sasuke! I'm glad he's getting better, memory-wise. That part at the end almost had ME crying, too. I just keep loving this fic more and more. I hope everyone reviews so it's updated so quickly, like last time!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Old sasu is coming back ^^ at last! and uh... can't you kill junichiro?? i HATE him so much T_T
About sakura... luv her atidute X3 and kakasixsakura?? one vote here ^^
About sakura... luv her atidute X3 and kakasixsakura?? one vote here ^^
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT YOU HAVE TO ADD MORE SOON. It took me like 3 hours to read the whole thing and it's really adn I'm kinda mixed up on Sasuke. On one hand I want the ninja, cold, hard assed, sexy as hell, bastard that was old Sasuke but on the other I kinda of like this sweet gentle, cute Sasuke. AS LONG AS HE DOSN"T DIE!!!!!!!!! Then I'd have to kill you(and so would Noruto)
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!!! Please update soon.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gods... Can you get anymore sensual and moving and absolutely fabulous?? Probably you do... ^_^
You update so rarely that I didn't notice the previous update and I missed it out
but I had two chapters to read at once now!!
And since I read the previous ones so long ago, I decided to start from the beginning ^_^
So after reading all 8 chapters once again I'm smitten! I almost forgot how absolutely wondelrful is this fic.
At some point (last chapter) Sasuke was almost too sweet and soft, the Itachi-incident being the apogee of this side of his character,
but the small parts of his old behaviour popping here and there are making it all believable and satisfying.
I love the moment when he tries to dominate the kiss in the bath -awesome :)
I hope you'll update soon, I can't wait till he gets his sight back (I hope he does!!!) and sees what a hunk he's been making out with all this time ^_^
You update so rarely that I didn't notice the previous update and I missed it out
but I had two chapters to read at once now!!
And since I read the previous ones so long ago, I decided to start from the beginning ^_^
So after reading all 8 chapters once again I'm smitten! I almost forgot how absolutely wondelrful is this fic.
At some point (last chapter) Sasuke was almost too sweet and soft, the Itachi-incident being the apogee of this side of his character,
but the small parts of his old behaviour popping here and there are making it all believable and satisfying.
I love the moment when he tries to dominate the kiss in the bath -awesome :)
I hope you'll update soon, I can't wait till he gets his sight back (I hope he does!!!) and sees what a hunk he's been making out with all this time ^_^
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! i love it so much your whole story, especially the way you developed sasuke's open-ness instead of just changing the character, ITS SO GREAT! i cant wait to read more
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU!! YOUR CHAPTERS ARE SO LONG!! (squeal) And because of that...I have no complaints. The length of your chappies has exceeded my wildest dreams and made me an uber happy person :D Not only that, but your writing style and plot are AWESOME!! It's a dream come true...Anyway, I can't wait to read how Sasu-chan's surgery goes. I must admit that I'm extremely nervous. I'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO PAY ATTENTION IN MATH! D: Oh well. I always DID have trouble keeping myself from doodling or drifting off into a reverie in math class. I think it's natural XD As for the people that solely wrote "Update soon" (or anything along the lines of such a sorry excuse of a review) should be ashamed of themselves! I know I'd be pissed to read a crap-load of "Update soon" reviews! (sigh) I hope mine makes up for their rude and curt reviews...Or maybe I'm just aggravating you with this hella long review and taking up your precious time! I'MSORRYI'MSORRYI'MSORRY!! I'll shut up now. :3
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Meh, what could I possible say that hasn't been said before? It's a truly sorrowful chapter, sprinkled with those lovely cuddle moments that are too cute for words. I envision Sasuke as a closet cuddle-whore while Naruto... well, he seems naturally inclined to physical reassurance. The Itachi intrusion was extremely well-timed, though his demeanor seems to lack his natural impassiveness that's become his trademark characteristic. He was a bit too... spiteful... for my liking. I guess I just have the idea that Itachi would verbally and/or physically combat Sasuke in private, but not in front of others. Well, not verbally in front of others. It's an odd idea, I suppose.
Anyhow, kudos on the long-standing lovability of your story (especially since it's worthy of the praise) and I hope it continues... soon. Very soon. Please update very soon. XP
Anyhow, kudos on the long-standing lovability of your story (especially since it's worthy of the praise) and I hope it continues... soon. Very soon. Please update very soon. XP