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Assuming that the very 1st review on the 21st was #1, this review brings the count to 49 reviews. Come on guys, in 4 days, _during_ the work/school week, that's one hell of a turnout. (For those who, like me, are trying to bring the total up to 75 so that our author friends will take pity on us and update, that means we only have 26 more to go....if you each review 1! more time, we'll hit 75) As an aside to Kirei and Cecilia, if you guys haven't written chapter nine, yet, and you don't have writers block or anything, I would respectfully ask that you seriously consider getting it ready NOW since it doesn't look like it'll be more than 5 days {absolute MAX} untill the review count hits 75. NOW, moving on to actual story advice, might I recommend that you guys consider how Naruto and Sasuke are gonna eventually take care of "my lord bastard" Junichiro. Not wanting to be presumptuous here, but I'm fairly certain that at LEAST a 60% majority (of readers) would like to see the little odious dingleberry killed. Personally, I took great pleasure in conjuring up a humiliation-based scene wherein the ACTUAL Fire Lord (junichiro's father) and his whole court listen to a [restored] Sasuke and Naruto explaining their actions, and Sasuke telling them all about how the little bastard tried to force sasuke to sleep with him [ref Ch3] right in front of Junichiro's fiancee` and watch the chaos erupt. Even as a quiet scandal, that'd be a pain if found out and hushhed up, but in front of ALL the nobles....but I digress, my ideas are not yours, so finish the story whichever way it guides you. I'll be here reading your work 'till the story ends (and possibly beyond)

I wanna give you a really indeepth review with all that good stuff, but I don't really have a lot to say other than this story is very awesome. You explained the amnesia and the dissociative disorder very well. You just took some sort of Psych class didn't you? Anyway. I like the way Sasuke's personality changes so slightly and everything. I get so excited when I see the small changes. And OMG Itachi, I was so scared! Poor Sasuke. Um, other than that I can really just say it's a really awesome story and I hope you update soon.

I found this story yesterday and in between sleeping have read the entire thing. I have to say....this is the best Sasu/Naru story I have read. I do get fustrated at times with Sasuke not being 'himself' but I rpriase you for this...it means you have written this story so well as to make you feel what the characters are feeling. It's Naruto's fustration I was feeling myself. High marks definately....is it at all possible to ask you to email me when the new chaps are up? I would be grateful. I'm also cursious as to where Sukura and Kakashe are going. Even before you wrote the convo between Naruto and Sasuke I was wondering at the time spent together. It would be a sweet twist to the tale. And he WAS the one to suggest she have childern to drive him batty. LOL. Once again well done.

Your story has gotten quite interesting so far and I know I'm just waiting for another twist (though I must admit I knew that Mitani would turn out to be Sasuke from the moment he was introduced). I can't wait to see how the next chapter will turn out.

(Thank you, by the way, for writing it.)

Aaaaahhh... this chapter was so good yet the ending was so sad. Though I'm sure he'll make it and regain his eyesight, it would just be too massively cruel to seperate them twice. I look forward the next chapter~

Hi, I just found this story and it's great. You have a wonderfully descriptive writing style. I hope you get enough reviews to continue soon. Sorry I can't give advise or critice you or anything, but I'm not much of a writer. Hope you update soon.

This is an excellent story, very well written and thought out. I can tell you put a lot time into it, and can't blame you for asking for lots of reviews, because you do indeed deserve them. You have my vote to keep writing! Reflections is very compelling and I am dying to read what happens next. :)

Ano, it's me again, I went through and read your reviews, and I have to wonder, why are you so hard up on getting more? It seems to me that you have a great deal of loyal followers to your story and their reviews are amazing. Any author would be honored by the reviews they have already recieved. So, even though I still think it would be good to reward your reviewers with sneekpeek excertps for reviewing, I have to agree with one of your reviewers when they said that choosing to put your story on this sight means that you do it for yourself, and your fans, but it is ultimatly YOUR choice to make. Not every one is going to get reviews for their storries, the fact that you have had so many hits speaks for it's self, but the amazing reviews about your story should have you riding on high. If you wish to continue this story then do so, I, as well as many others, would like that very much. If you don't wish to continue the story, many of us will be sad, but we will understand. The choice is yours, and no one elses, to make. Do not rely on the reviews of others to know the worth of your witting, do it because you love to write. This is all that I have to say. *Bows* Arigatou. I look forward to seeing more of your story, and hope that you will indeed continue this wonderful work of creativity, and art. Ja ne.

OH... MY... GOD ... that's all I can say... I'm speechless with this fiction so much... I need time to think... I'll come back later... Maybe by then, I have something to say already.... ........ .......... ........... .............. .................. ....................... ......................... ...............................

OMG!!!!!!!! I am about to cry, geez I'm all teary and crap over that last chapter, crap. Just write more okay. thanks!!!