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for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

by Tsukineko9

person Tokitoh
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sucks it up* *chokes* *coughs*
Somehow, in this story I really don't care about sex scenes, I even ended up skipping some because I was interested in the plot development. %) The ending seemed really pink and fluffy, but I don't care. The situation is just so horrible. Seeing the person that is dear to you so weak and miserable is extremely difficult. And this whole thing is even more difficult for Sasuke. But YAY for the surgery. ^_____^ Somehow, I believe that they'll be able to make it. I mean, they suffer so much... I would've been dead long ago if I had to go through all this. Too much suffering for my poor brain. *sobs*
Please continue. I am deeply interested. ^__^v
person W
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Sob* That was so sad! I really liked this chapter, but it was also sorta a downer. What if he can't remember everything? What if he does just to repeat the past? Great as always, but also so very sad...
Please update soon!
person MissingNo
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He forgot about the rice for the onigiri..
person KIKI
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another awsome chapter... just finished chp 5 pt 2!!!

I really like where ur taking this story!

person Mishachan
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you guys have outdone yourselves. the chapter was done really well. lots of emotions. thanks for writing such a wonderful story. i'm a big fan of all the stories you both have written!
person inufangirl007
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so sad! i hope sasuke at least gets his eye-sight back! i love the way u write this, its so detailed and they seem really in charecter(except for sasuke at this point, but it makes sense since he has no memories)! please update soon!
person Oran
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well...let me get a tissue for the tears first...hmm. Making me cry, leaving it at the sad part...I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! If I don't read it soon I'LL die of heartache. Boy, I really hope things turn out okay, but recently those two haven't really had good luck... Now I'll all worried. If it turns out to be a happy ending, I'll calapse from shock. Much would have to happen to make it work...Anywho, you did wonderfully. It was well written, and I'm glad the medical explanations didn't knock anyone out, cause usually they do. It's good, and I will pray you update this much niceness soon. Ce.
ALWAYS REVIEW RIGHT AWAY FOR SASUKE'S SAKE PEOPLES!!!!!!
person Kat
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh you have to write more, now! I need to know what happens! This chappie was great, but it was so sad. I hope everything turns out alright. Sasuke must get his sight back, and his memories. Everything was pretty well done, and I have no complaints at all. Update soon ple~ase!
person Hawk
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, you story is amazing, even if it wasn't before, it is now. Everything just keeps getting deeper and deeper. I love it. And your honesty with demanding requests, it's emboldened me to do more then simply ask for them as well. Maybe you've started something? Becuase I agree, if someone likes a story, and even if they don't, the author's should be told why. Thanks for the update guys!!
~Hawk
person cknoakira
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have always enjoyed your work and this story was one of my favorites. You have no idea how happy it has made me to be able to read new chapters. I especially love your characterization of Naruto. There are a lot of stories where they will get Sasuke's character, but they will greatly change Naruto's. You also did a great job of Sasuke's character (obviously before him losing his memories) and I love how you treated Sakura. Once again, there are a lot of stories I read that really alter Sakura's personality as well. I can't wait to read the next chapter and am hoping dearly that you get the necessary reviews. Oh, and I love the style of indicating the change in POV. It really helps.