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for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

by Tsukineko9

person Osuwari00
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really love this. I found it here and read the whole thing through. I can't wait for the next installment. :D
person dark_Angel
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not opposed to you "holding the chapters ransom", seeing as you guys HAVE put a lot of work into this story, and I appreciate the efforts, but shouldn't you guys keep it at a steady number? I think 50 is pretty reasonable....75 might be a bit too long for people who reviewed, but because of other people not reviewing, they end up having to wait.

Anyways...I like how you guy are gradually bringing back Sasuke, and I hope you get your 75 reviews soon....sighh~ and put up the next chapter....=(
person melar
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This was a very emotional chapter, I cheered, laughed and cried, and weird mixtures of the three, the entire time I was reading it. When I got to the part of Itachi confronting Sasuke I actually stood up and yelled at the screen "You jerk! Don't make me come in there and beat you to death with a brick. Leave Sasuke alone!" The other members of my family gave me a weird look as if I had gone crazy. They just don't understand how moving a good story can be. Sometimes you just have to react even if it makes you look slightly insane. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the wonderful work!
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Je...sus... That was SOOO good! Holy CRAP! I totally didn't see the whole Itachi episode coming. Plus, I absolutely LOVE how you're making Sasuke's memories come back so gradually. It makes it a lot more convincing. And it seems like you've done a lot of research on amnesia itself, and how the mind works to a certain extent. (I was all excited because we're studying the skull in Anthropology Lab, and I actually understood a lot of what you were talking about! XD) Other than that, your characterization is perfect as always, especailly this "new Sasuke". It's really neat how we get to see this subdominant side of him. And how it's affecting Naruto is really well-written too. I'm so glad that my lord bastard finally got a little bit of what's coming to him!

And I totally understand about your right to ask for reviews. If I had half the fans you did, and half the clout, I'd be asking for them too! ^_^
person Inuchi
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg... u made me cry at the end of this chapter...and i'm still crying now!! if you kill sasuke in the sergery i'll...I'll have sever depression for a week!! and i'm not even kidding!! i kno i'm a loser and i have no life but u two r such exelent athours that u do this to me! sheding tears over a fan fic!! so please don't kill sasuke in the sergery!! please don't do it???
person ShinigamiTaishou
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi, this is so a wonderful chapter. This is so well written. Hope to see more again, I will review your next chapters too, because this story is worth to do it. So keep doing your amazing story onegai. Ja!
person Kuroiryuu
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
W00T! The next chapter was up just as the weekend seemed like it was gonna suck! Now, I hope you can relate that (despite the GREAT previous eight),. . . WE WANT [excuse the Ghost in the Shell reference here] SECTION 9! WE WANT SECTION NINE! Now, please excuse, but there was nothing to lose (and all to gain) by writing this refrain. And, sad but true, I must bid you adieu. Please update soon, preferably by the next phase of the moon.


It sucked, but babbling about the greatness of the chapter just seemed to contain less feeling than expressing it like this, in crappily ryhming (spelled right?) poetry sporadically conjurred by anxiety about when you guys will next update. Please do so soon, I'm running out of {decent} things to read >_<
person madme shannon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle sniff* WWWWHHHHHAAAAAAAAAA that was totally sobworthy
pls let there be more soon
i don't think i could handle it otherwise
person KeairaxSeiaa
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was really interesting to see a form of dissociative disorder used in a story. Out of curiosity, did you research the subject specifically for Sasuke's problem, or do you actually know someone who suffers from it? I have dissociative disorder, but it's dissociative depersonalization, so it's a bit different from what Sasuke has in your story. It's nice to see, though, that you do at least know what you're talking about when it comes to what Sasuke's suffering from, and that you're not just using the term "amnesia" blindly for your own purposes. I didn't know much about the other titles you gave to what he's suffering from, but his symptoms do seem to be in line with dissociative amnesia. Great job, you're obviously putting a good amount of work into your story, and I like to see that. I'll anxiously await your next update.
person Inuchi
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoosh! those chap takeme an hour to read! but the fricken good one's where do you get this wonderful writing ability!? jeez i'm adicted to this story! welll do update when you can! i will stay egerly awaitingthe nest chap with egerness!!! X3 Ja for now!!