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awwww i'm scared too... i hope everything goes good i don't think i can cry anymore... well once again great chapter hope to see more

I am in great physical and mental pain. You are so evil. EVIL. You are the root of all evil. I can't believe you won't update. I mean, I was waiting for this chapter for so long and I almost lost all hope, but when I saw that you updated... it made me so unbelievably happy. *sobs* Because I love all your stories and I recommend them to all my friends, and I even read them for, like, 10 times each. I love your character interpretation, interesting plot twists and even Sakura as you describe her. Though, I would... no, I guess that's how Sasuke would be if he lost his memory. But it still feels kind of awkward to read about highly emotional and kind Sasuke-teme. ^__^'

I completely understand that you want opinions and coherent reviews (hell, I wanted opinions when I wrote my first story), but that is just so unfair. I would love to dig into every little detail in this story, and every other story you have, but I really don't think it would make a huge difference. Because when I criticize, most fanfiction writes go into "that's how I see it, if you don't like it, don't read it. And I hate you for pissing me off" mood. You are the authors, I am your reader, and I think that things you write are great. I read your stories, I even wrote this stupid thingy to tell you how great you are. That definitely means something.

Everything is so good in your stories. Unnecessary details, mental dialogues (and monologues ^__^) are just so in-character. This whole situation is really sad and that whole thing when Naruto and Sasuke met again... really. Honestly. There are parts I find unnecessary, but most of the situations and emotions you describe make up for everything. And much, much more. I beg you to finish this story. I know you might get bored, or busy, or... something, but it's just so unfair. You are great writers and I am sure that you can make it. This story has been great so far. I believe that the ending won't disappoint me. Even if the outcome won't be satisfying, I know you will be able to make it sound just right.

I want to know how everything ends. That's all I am asking for. Please write more. More. Much more. ^___^v

Shoot! You had me crying right along with naruto & Sasuke! Thanks so much for the update. Really enjoyed it!

Wah.. I feel like crying after the last part when Sasuke and Naruto are discussing the upcoming surgery...
This installment was GREAT. OMfG. Itachi's appearance was a good abrupt surprise, showing how even though the two have found eachother again, there's still "Trouble in Paradise" (ha, such a cliche'd term to use...), and it was a good transition into Sasuke's diagnosis. Nice! *thumbs up, 'nice guy' pose* And I love how Sasuke's slowly but surely regressing back to his "normal" state, how his dreams are memories (possibly?) and how real his amnesia seems to be. Naruto's torment that's mentioned by Kakashi (how he's more disheartened every day because of Sasuke's lack of memories) is supported by what happened in the tub with the "Naruto-koi" incident. Overall, great installment :D And I hope the reviews reach 75 soon >o<

Ah, review number two. Well... There are minor spelling errors here and there, but other than that, awesome. I liked the whole, looking into the lake and seeing his old self thing. Hopefully, Sasuke'll have his hair back soon. The thought of him with short hair is scary. -.-;; Anyways. Hope the surgery goes well and both Sasuke and Naruto are successful with their barrier problems. Keep up the fantastic work. I'll be on the lookout for the next update, as usual.
~Ja
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Awesome chapter. Go Naruto for getting some progress on Sasuke! He's slowly beginning to act like himself again. It's cool how you wrote about him wanting to punchin Naruto upside the head and hesitating for help like his old self. Very smart.

I hope you get 75 reviews soon cause I can't wait till the next chapter (You're chapters are so long! XD I love it.)! I'm so praying that Sasuke's surgery will go okay XD. This will have a happy ending, right? Did I ask that question before? I can't quite remember.

Anyways, long review, I guess. Great chapter and update soon!

wow....Like I mean WOW!!! Yeah, Really WOW!!!!! I so love this story! the slow evloution of the story and the characters, it's WOW.......

At first I was a little dodgey about the writing style, all the different POV's but after becoming acustomed to it I quiet like it! I really like when an author tells what's happening in a charaters head and this fanfic totally delivers!!

Can't wait for the next chapter(s) keep'm coming! Will bribe if nessesary :D

just to point out that in the latest chapter naruto says that he has never been to sasuke's apartment before is a mistake because in the beginning chapters sasuke forces naruto to sleep over many times. naruto has slept, ate, and showered in sasuke's apartment.

O man I've been checking this story over and over and I thought you guys were going to just abandon it...I'm so happy you started it up again!! I love how you guys really stay true to their feelings/insecurities about one another, and by putting it in the first person, one can really get a feeling for how they feel. I've been meaning to ask you guys this, but would you be willing to do a trade of sorts? Like a one shot fanfic for an illustration (of whatever you want ie. sasunaru, ichigo-kon-ishida...just tell me!)...I understand if you guys are too busy (as i can be as well), but i thought it might be fun...Anyhow, keep up the good work! I have read every one of your bleach and naruto stories and you are by far the most talented writers i have come across (aside from my beloved akaitsume)...Ciao!

Great chapter!) Sorry for not reviewing before. Great story so far too! Poor Naruto and Sasuke. I hope that Sasuke will get his sight back and that things will work out for Naruto. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I hope you get your 50 review! Later