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for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

by Tsukineko9

person dark_Angel
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Welllllll you guys finally updated. =D Can't wait to see how Sasuke will regain his memories and his eyesight ^_^ ....he WILL rite?? ........anyways, I love your stories. I find it kind of sad since you guys have given up on SPartan Ninjas, but I love Reflections as well, so I'm grateful you haven't given up on this one as well.

update soon~! ^______^
person Meikyuu
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke, that even with this amnesia thing Sasuke feels so strongly about Naruto. And seeing 'real' Sasuke in his 'angry' moments warms my heart:P
person meEksiNs
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG. is sasuke ever gonna have is eyesight back? or even his WHOLE self back? not that his current self is uh something to complain about but still.. damn SAD. and what the hell is up with that jerk Junichiro?
Anyways, love the fic. SIMPLY love it. THUMBS UP.
Update soon. Thanks (also for the the fantastic read).
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There are 55 reviews now so you should update really really soon
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah! So sad, but so sweet. I'm so glad they're back together, finally! I'll have you know, I cried at some parts. I hope Sasuke gets his sight back soon, if not his memory. Gotta give Naruto *something* to look forward to, right? Well, anyways, keep up the awesome work, and I'll be looking out for the next update.
Ja~
SSS
person jay
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, please by any and all means continue it. I especially like how your keeping the characters in their character, but yet continue to develop a unique and complex storyline.
person KT Ryn
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Updatedness! Okay - a detailed review eh? Well, I thought the beginning was the best. The discovery of Sasuke, the reuniting with several old friends, and the salvation of Naruto! Oh man! I must say I was a little suprised and opposed to the fact that Naruto would kiss/etc. Sasuke when he CLEARLY doesn't know what is going on and the fact that Sasuke went along with his advances. I thought/hoped they'd put it off a bit, but whatever. You do an amazing job conveying how sad it really is that Sasuke is blind and how Naruto really feels. This is still my favorite fanfic so EVERYONE REVIEW, NOW!!! Thanks for continuing the story!
person Hana
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good, and I enjoyed the liberal sprinklings of snuggling within the fic. I only had one minor problem. In the beginning when Sasuke still thought of himself as Mitani... you would think a person with amnesia would grasp to any life line of knowing who they were (considering a year isn't that long). He seemed to be fighting remembering all the way up until he found Naruto. I dunno... I just figure he'd at least be interested to know his real name and be more... helpful toward people who might know anything about him. Being jumpy in the beginning I can understand, but after going to the village he still seemed.... really defensive.

And, I was wondering... wouldn't he still be able to feel chakra? I mean, he's done it for most of his life and some cases I've heard of people with amnesia they can still play the piano because they practiced so long it comes naturally.
person addison jade
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I was totally gonna go to bed early, but found this was updated.... and did not. I love the length, even if is contributing to my tiredness, and how you have a coherent passage from different elements of the plot.

Am so glad that sasuke was quick to recognize naruto's affection, if it hadn't been that 'easy' (and i use the term loosely because it wasn't easy, just easier than it could have been), who knows how badly naruto would have degenerated.

Anyway, it's late, but i just wanted to drop a quick line and say that i'm really enjoying this fairly uncommon twist to the story. Can't wait to find out how the development of the memories coming back, and the eyesight returned (or not returned).
person yuurimaoh
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*clasping hands under chin in thought* When I first clicked on reflections, I will honestly say that I thought 'only 7 chapters? I can breeze through this tonight!' *sheepish smile* I was wrong...but, that doesn't mean that I didn't try...I got half way through chapter 4 when I decided that I should sleep, to better focus on finishing it in the morning. The first chapter reeled me in and the ones that followed kept me at the edge of my seat. What can I say that hasn't been said before? This is an astonishing fic...the storyline, the way the characters express themselves...I'm genuinely stunned in place. It comes as a sad, but comforting feeling to await the next upload. Sad, because of just how long it will take for the fifty reviews to be submitted and for the chapter to be finished. But, comforting to know that it will be a lengthy chapter like no other (or at least I pray to the cosmos that it is). I applaud you. You make a wonderful team. And, just like everyone else, I shall be waiting for the next upload patiently. :3