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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so awsome! excellent installment. i missed sasuke. i actually like the amnesiac more than broody sasuke. must reread the prior chapters.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOT!! You updated!! I was so happy when I say Refelctions at the top of the list!
So they finally found Sasuke, when I was reading how they slowly figured it out, I was almost giddy with excitment! And I kept having to go downstairs for supper and all that!!
Anyways, I've finally got the time to finish reading the chapter and it was really good, as usual! Somehow, I can understand why Naruto wants the old Sasuke back, and I feel the same. I'd also miss his eyes too, they're so endlessly black! This is gonna have a happy ending, right?
Holy, that was a pretty long review! I hope you two get 50 reviews soon so you'll update again!
Keep it up, okay?
So they finally found Sasuke, when I was reading how they slowly figured it out, I was almost giddy with excitment! And I kept having to go downstairs for supper and all that!!
Anyways, I've finally got the time to finish reading the chapter and it was really good, as usual! Somehow, I can understand why Naruto wants the old Sasuke back, and I feel the same. I'd also miss his eyes too, they're so endlessly black! This is gonna have a happy ending, right?
Holy, that was a pretty long review! I hope you two get 50 reviews soon so you'll update again!
Keep it up, okay?
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! That was so great! Thank you thank you thank you! .... Sorry. Spaz attack. But all spazzing aside, that was so wonderful. I felt so sad when Naruto saw Sasuke all scarred up. Poor Sasuke too, so close to his memories and yet so far... So great. I am really, really looking forward to your updates in the future!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please please continue. this one story that needs to be finished.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My first thought is... poor melon headed Sasuke. XD Being a fuzzy head is going to cause some problems, I'm sure. So happy for an update. I was stunned when I saw the update notice. It feels like forever since I'd read the last installment. I don't really feel comfortable calling them chapters... they're way too deliciously long. Everything felt good in this one, except for one thing that bugged me. Tsunade has been about as cautious as one can get concerning keeping Naruto under wraps concerning the nobles... and yet she not only allowed him to leave his cell, but also threw him into Sasuke's old apartment for some quality-time. It just seems strange. Of course, one could chalk it up to being happy about the reunion, but still. She's usually not so careless. Meh, I'm still happy with how it turned out though. Bathing scenes are hot. Keeping the torches burning for another update (relatively) soon. The predicament with "Spartan Ninjas" made me want to cry, but I can understand how that, life, and everything else can slow down appeasing readers and fans lol. Maybe we'll all get lucky and have everything work out later on. Thanks again for the update!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing. That's so a great story you have created. This last chapter was so full of emotions. I loved it. Hope that people will review because this story has to continue. So please keep going your excellent story. Thanks for the entertainment! See ya!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad Sasuke been found but can the old-hag help him to get his sight back. ( I hope so ) Waiting on black wings for the next update.
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LLOOOOOVVVEEEDDDDD it!!!!!! You are planning on actually updating it right?!?!? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon so i can finish reading it!!!!!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! You can't just leave it there!!! Omg, you SO have to update soon!!!
I've got an irking that that blind guy with the bandana is Sasuke! Will you kill me now that I've said that? I'm sorry but I had to say something!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGOMG UPDATE SOON!
I've got an irking that that blind guy with the bandana is Sasuke! Will you kill me now that I've said that? I'm sorry but I had to say something!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGOMG UPDATE SOON!
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!! must....read....more........ And I'm not just saying this, this is GREAT!!! ^.^ I applaud you both! I am totally addicted, and MUST HAVE MORE!!!
I know, you're both (or maybe just one) probably busy, but even short little updates will satisfy.
*rollling around on floor* CONTINUE!!! I'm waiting, watching, hoping, waiting, mourning the fact that there're no updates, waiting, anticipating the update, waiting, coming back, waiting, thinking about what will probably happen next, waiting, trying to satisfy my desire to read more with other writings, waiting...and did I mention waiting?
XDDDD
But seriously, I loved it!! I mean, it's well-written, easy to follow, you both clearly have more than mediocre writing skills (very good I'd say), and if there were any suggestions, watch out for typos. And read your stuff over again. ^^ I send suggestions with begs!! Really well-written, and another once-over will get rid of the typos and tiny little things I encountered. Nothing big, or technique deprived, all of it nice and more believable than most (and I mean 98% here) fanfics out there (there're even some moments in some of mine..... >.> <.< ...but I didn't just tell you that, if anyone asks.... XD). Just CONTINUE!!!! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!!!! O_O, (wide-eyed with a tear, to let you know)
I know, you're both (or maybe just one) probably busy, but even short little updates will satisfy.
*rollling around on floor* CONTINUE!!! I'm waiting, watching, hoping, waiting, mourning the fact that there're no updates, waiting, anticipating the update, waiting, coming back, waiting, thinking about what will probably happen next, waiting, trying to satisfy my desire to read more with other writings, waiting...and did I mention waiting?
XDDDD
But seriously, I loved it!! I mean, it's well-written, easy to follow, you both clearly have more than mediocre writing skills (very good I'd say), and if there were any suggestions, watch out for typos. And read your stuff over again. ^^ I send suggestions with begs!! Really well-written, and another once-over will get rid of the typos and tiny little things I encountered. Nothing big, or technique deprived, all of it nice and more believable than most (and I mean 98% here) fanfics out there (there're even some moments in some of mine..... >.> <.< ...but I didn't just tell you that, if anyone asks.... XD). Just CONTINUE!!!! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!!!! O_O, (wide-eyed with a tear, to let you know)