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Such a great fic. Sad for now, but I love it. You guys just keep blowing me away with your works! Looking forward to the conclusion!

I'm loving the fic, but I'd love it more if you dropped hte annoying and gratuitous Japanese. You should only use Japanese in a fic when there isn't a good direct translation in English. Thus, name-suffixes and items that do not exist in English-speaking areas (like onigiri, or kunai, or yukata) are perfectly fine, but using "sankyuu" instead of "Thank you," (which it is the katakana-version of, in the first place), is just stupid. Still, it's an awesome fic, despite the gratuitous Japanese. Most fics with random and pointless Japanese don't get read beyond the first couple "nani"s.

I'm a Japanese major (who, incidentally, just got back from a semester in Japan,) and will be graduating soon. If you have questions about Japanese culture or language (or literature, or history, or whatnot), email me and I'll see if I can help you out. Just cut back on the useless code-switching. Code-switching is only fun when you're /talking/ to other mulitlingual people, not in writing.

I've just read your whole story and it's sooooo great!!!! Please write the end!!! Ayame just find sasuke!!! (who said I was a sasuke groupie? lol) I love your writing! it's really great. I so much want to see what your going to come up with....
I'm sorry for my poor english but it's not my mother language. If you answerd this review by an e-mail (but I think you have other things to do ^-^) please put a clear title to the e-mail ^-^
Keep going! congratulation!

Tsuki

You have an excellent plot going, but it's kinda irksome how the perpsectives keep changing.
I also enjoy the length of your chapters; I hope you update with much vigor and speed
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and I forgot to ask, is the blind boy... the infamous Sasuke that had Naruto going nuts?
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if so, I really hope you alleviate his blindness
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Great fic! please tell me your going to continue writing this? It is too good to give up on! Please update soon!

This is the best story I have ever read. I have spent 3 straight days just reading. =) The story is pulling me in so deep that I just want more and more, and couldnt stop reading until I've read it all.
This is wonderful! The way you write it in the first person and how the lines with Kyuubi just fit so perfectly, revealing so much of the state Naruto is in.
It's wonderful how you've made it so ... I cant find words... agonizingly blissful to read this. I honestly cannot say what my favourite part in the story is because there are so many and they just all blend into one big... one. (sorry, my brains are fuzzy, I think I'm still inside the story so deeply ^^;)
I am crying for Naruto's saddness, its making me ache when I read the story where they are separated. The last part revealing where Sasuke was sent shivers down my spine (in a good way), what a gliffhanger. I hope to see them together soon, they have both suffered so much and deserve happiness together.
I'm suffering now, waiting for an update achingly.
(I'm going to draw fanart for this now. definitely. ^^)

In my mind, this is the best NaruSasu fanfic EVER! I've read several and this one is still my favorite! Are you planning on finishing it? I will cry if you leave us all hanging. And I knew, I KNEW Mitani was Sasuke! I did! Awesome plot twist! PLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSE willl you write more . . . ?

Nicely written and compelling to read. You should definitely continue the story as you've built strong characters and plot.

AHHHHHHHH!! You're driving me up the wall and into a mental house!
How could you do this to me?!!That was the evilest cliffy I have every
met. I have been waiting for five months and you still haven't updated
yet!! You probably don't like me begging you to update ASAP, but come
on! It's been five months! I only beg for updates on stories I REALLY like,
and so I beg of you. Please don't drop this story because if you do, then
there will be a WWIII. If this story was some other good story, but
then stopped updating. I would have stopped looking for updates. But
your story it' some other good story. It's a mind-blowing fantastic, and
incredible story. After five months i'm still looking for an update. I would
be really sad if you just stop right there. So please, don't drop this story
and continu.e