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UWAHHHHH~! Another wonderful fic from you guys... I've been gradually getting around to reading as much of your stuff as I possibly can, and this is a WONDERFUL story. As expected, grammar and flow is goooooood. And I can't wait for a new chapter *rubs hands together in anticipation*... Good to see Sasuke alive and kicking so to speak... unless this is one of those "oh but i only picked it from this guy who was lying dead on the street" stories. =_=;

But if Mitani is Sasuke... could it be that he's FORGOTTEN NARUTO?! *gasps*

Mou... this is gonna have me pondering hypotheticals for awhile now... >.< But i'm sure nothing will compare to whatever reality you choose to create.

*applauds*

Always waiting from more of your work~!

Love, the Goddess of the Void.

Wow, what a great story so far. Please don't stop writing it; it's very interesting so far. Also, you left everyone in such suspense! It would be a damn shame if you abandoned
this fic, since it's one of your best.

wow...im very impressed at this story. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see more of this. Everything you write in here I can imagine really happening to them. I like how you switch back and forth between characters. I'm currently working on one that does that. It's harder then it looks. ^-^ Newaz... I hope to see more great things in this story. Well he find Sasuke? We'll see...

~Akira~

Oh. My. F*cking. Gosh. HOLY CRAP! this story is beautiful! so vivid and descriptive! I can't WAIT for the next chapter to see what happens. Will Obaa-san FINALLY agree? will Mi-nii-san go with her to Kohona? is he REALLY Sasuke???!!! [i had a hunch the second he opened the door!! YESSSSS! -punches air-]. Will Kyuubi ever get his testicals back?! lol. the entire story keeps weaving mystery and suspense. It took me about six hours, but I read this thing all in one go, and I have to say I adore it. the writing style that you two have is unique and daring and very deep. I am anxious for the continuation. Hope to read again soon! ja!
+J+

Wow, what a great story. I feel so bad for Naruto! Hopefully, Sasuke will come back (*crosses fingers*).

I just found this story today and have already read all the chapters. It is a interesting story, and I love it. I'm looking foward to future chapters. If you were looking for any productive criticism, I just couldn't find anything to make better.

This is a wonderful story. Luckily I found it after reading Spartans. I honestly can't think of any suggestions to give since it is already well written. I look forward to reading more when you can update. THanks for sharing your stories.

Good....errr....almost midnight, KK! I was going to flee home when i saw the hour, but after such a heart-wrenching chapter like this, i am very much moved to NOT move.
Well, starting with the Kyuubi no Kitsune stunt with Sakura there, you caught me flat-footed. Yes, that's a good thing. Very, very umpredictable, my dear author! Not many people out there can brag about that. Well, bragging counts only when talking about oversized facts, and this is not the case....sorry i'm rambling by now.
Back to the subject: Next thing that stopped my heart for about a minute there was the "many months later" Gods, you know the writer is a manga reader when such writer jumps in time like that. Again, it's a good thing, completely necessary for this story. The impact of the rest of the tale wouldn't be the same without that lapsus of time. A time of uncertainty, doubts and faith-losing, it seems.
I couldn't understand at the beginning why Naruto had accepted Sasuke's death so easily (well, easily after the whole getting Kyuubified tragic episode) But after turning it around in my mind for a few minutes, yes, it's understandable, a self-defense mechanism activating before a highly possible hurtful situation. Still, the blond is a fighter deep down, maybe you could add some dreams over there. Nothing overly dramatic, just signs of how deep in his soul Naruto still sees Sasuke coming back.
And of course, the last but definitely not least of the smacking surprises of today: Gods, Sasuke! His new name sounds pretty southern japanese....ah, but the pain! Is he really blind? Kirei, do you not care about giving me and other five hundred fans out there heart failure??!!! I'm starting to pray this same hour for some healing jutsu to give back the Uchiha survivor his Sharingan back. Please, let him be okay.
I'm barely holding on for this fic's next chapters. So promising! So very nice! So very commendable! My congrats and greetings and bows to you.
Have you not heard voices in the wind telling you about writing a sequel for the vampire one fic? The Of love and.....? Have you? Pay attention, they're surely there!!
Kirei, terrific job. Please update soon. Someone's life is depending on it (talking about pressing matters...)
Blessings,
May.

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!! No no no! Baaaad cliffie!!!!!! Noooooooo *whines*! You had me in_tears_! I just... noo! If that woman will not help Naruto I don't know what I'll - urgh! I'm so into the story I can't form a review - that's how good it was. Now I'm going to cry because there isn't any more... You gotta update! Please!!! I just.... Sasuke better not be dead! Great story, I'm completly taken.

oooo wow *O* I finaly finsihed this one too, in 2-3 days XD my I think your stories here are addictive XP

But still, this one is very nicely written too, and I can see yoru effort that you took to write this. And I want to make a prediction!: Mitoni is actualy Sasuke, but he's lost his memory from the fall or something. >> And he might not be blind, but his eyes are being covered up so he could be using Sharingan or something. O.o *shrugs* I think we're able to tell the quilt has teh Uchiha symbol on it ;) wweeee I'm excited if theres going to be a next chapter! You guys are really awesome writters ^O^

Keep up teh lovely work, sorry I don't have much constructive critism to say, but I'm not the best at that stuff ^.^;;; Keep up the good work!