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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read Failure! Part 2! Yay, Naruto's back! I didn't realize how much I missed him. Man, I got really teary-eyed in a few parts during the chapter. T__T And Sasuke's blind?! Oh no! I hope he can see again, somehow... And I'm happy that you made Sakura cool. In a lot of Sasu/Naru fics, Sakura's a stupid jerk, when in the series, she isn't that bad.
^__^ Update soon!
^__^ Update soon!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I have read all chapters in the course of 5 hours today and I am so amazed! Your story is gorgeous! I have not read anything this moving in years! Please don't let this one die. I really love the style it is written and how much you have developed the characters. Seriously one of the best things I have read ever. I am really looking forward to the next chapter when you post it.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, by the way.
Have you ever heard the song 'Collide'? It's by someone named something like Howie Day. It's not a song I particularly like (too pop for me), but it makes me think of this fic (which makes it a TON more bareable). If you get the chance, listen to it and think as if Sasuke were singing it. Some of the lines are right on the mark!
Have you ever heard the song 'Collide'? It's by someone named something like Howie Day. It's not a song I particularly like (too pop for me), but it makes me think of this fic (which makes it a TON more bareable). If you get the chance, listen to it and think as if Sasuke were singing it. Some of the lines are right on the mark!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
zomg you're EVIL. I mean... *dead* Aieeeee... Update as soon as you can. ^^; Because I'm enjoying every minute of this fic and I squee every time I see an update.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story. i think its cool the way you cut it of but at the same time kind of cruel. this is one story I dont want to see die in the dark depths of AFF.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that I've calmed down... I want you to know that I still really hate you!!
This is torture. How could you do this? You two are mean!
If someone asked what a good book is, I wouldn't hesitate in the answer, which is: sth that actually makes you live things without living them, sth that triggers a lot of different emotions in you like real life would do, a new wonderful esperience... Which is just a tiny part of what I think of your story.
How could you have more than 20 reviews in just 3 days? It's just amazing.
The plot is so well-woven, so deep... This last chapter is brilliant, you can't possibly imaging how I felt whenI saw you had updated...
I did never imagine that Sasuke was gonna be found in that way, but since so many months has gone buy, was probably one of the few solutions. I'm not yet sure whether I like it. I'm just looking foward to knowing what you plotted. But of course he would've returned if he hadn't lost his memory, which is the main reason why I think that blind boy is Sasuke, not to mention the emblem of the Uchiha,of course. I had to re-read everything that was said about him in the chapter to track any hidden clue to his real identity.Tanned? He must've sun-bathed...
The text is really fluid and astonishingly expressive, though I miss your unique double-POVed style (means-->miss Sasuke with Naruto together, ^___^) You really made me hate Kyubi, I suppose I prefer him just as a horny inside-voice, but he is priceless altogether. Sakura keeps being much better than the Sakura of the anime, I love all the weight that you put on her in the story. About Naruto, god it was time for him to recover!! Perfect was the "dialogue" between him & Sakura, and even better was how you chose to right it, first Sakura saying everything like she actually did & not actually having response, this isone ofthe things of your story that I like the most: you show with complete detail the feelings your main characters, in this case, first how Sakura felt about his speech, just sayin it, and then the view of Naruto, analysing and reacting to it in his insides.
Maybe the only bad thing is that too few things happen in the chapter, which can be forgiven because it is that, just one chapter in a story. It leaves you there with a very long face thinking: what then? It's a total cliff-hanger! This works here because you post it chapter by chapter, leaving us where you want, and it really gets to your point. But I'm not sure what I would have thought if I read the story from the beginning to the very end (when you had finished it)... Maybe I would think that it takes too long for things to happen, and the cliff-hangers woulb be "shallower".I don't know...
Anyway, I'm sure I would love your story, and your characters the same. So please keep up the excellent and professional work and update as soon as possible. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease
((By the way, I read Spartan Ninjas in the meantime, between updates... it's excellent as well, even being set in a different timeline, Naruto and Sasuke seem so much real, so much... them!! Are you updating it soon??))
cya after next chapter!!((==soon(I hope)))
This is torture. How could you do this? You two are mean!
If someone asked what a good book is, I wouldn't hesitate in the answer, which is: sth that actually makes you live things without living them, sth that triggers a lot of different emotions in you like real life would do, a new wonderful esperience... Which is just a tiny part of what I think of your story.
How could you have more than 20 reviews in just 3 days? It's just amazing.
The plot is so well-woven, so deep... This last chapter is brilliant, you can't possibly imaging how I felt whenI saw you had updated...
I did never imagine that Sasuke was gonna be found in that way, but since so many months has gone buy, was probably one of the few solutions. I'm not yet sure whether I like it. I'm just looking foward to knowing what you plotted. But of course he would've returned if he hadn't lost his memory, which is the main reason why I think that blind boy is Sasuke, not to mention the emblem of the Uchiha,of course. I had to re-read everything that was said about him in the chapter to track any hidden clue to his real identity.Tanned? He must've sun-bathed...
The text is really fluid and astonishingly expressive, though I miss your unique double-POVed style (means-->miss Sasuke with Naruto together, ^___^) You really made me hate Kyubi, I suppose I prefer him just as a horny inside-voice, but he is priceless altogether. Sakura keeps being much better than the Sakura of the anime, I love all the weight that you put on her in the story. About Naruto, god it was time for him to recover!! Perfect was the "dialogue" between him & Sakura, and even better was how you chose to right it, first Sakura saying everything like she actually did & not actually having response, this isone ofthe things of your story that I like the most: you show with complete detail the feelings your main characters, in this case, first how Sakura felt about his speech, just sayin it, and then the view of Naruto, analysing and reacting to it in his insides.
Maybe the only bad thing is that too few things happen in the chapter, which can be forgiven because it is that, just one chapter in a story. It leaves you there with a very long face thinking: what then? It's a total cliff-hanger! This works here because you post it chapter by chapter, leaving us where you want, and it really gets to your point. But I'm not sure what I would have thought if I read the story from the beginning to the very end (when you had finished it)... Maybe I would think that it takes too long for things to happen, and the cliff-hangers woulb be "shallower".I don't know...
Anyway, I'm sure I would love your story, and your characters the same. So please keep up the excellent and professional work and update as soon as possible. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease
((By the way, I read Spartan Ninjas in the meantime, between updates... it's excellent as well, even being set in a different timeline, Naruto and Sasuke seem so much real, so much... them!! Are you updating it soon??))
cya after next chapter!!((==soon(I hope)))
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH! could Mitani possibly Sasuke?! oh please say he's still alive! oh i love this story! it's beautifully written and i can picture it sooo well in my head! the imagery is wonderful and the structure makes the story impossible to become bored with! please bring Sasuke back soon! i miss him and Naruto needs to be happy again!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate you two far more than rationally possible!
Update now!
Update now!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!omg!omg! Please udate soon!!! Im gonna die if you don't!!!