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Oh my gosssssssssssssssssssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! The moment you introduced the new "unknown male orphan" I was positively sure it was Sasuke, but then I wasn't sure if you'll actually let us in on that secret in this chapter. Well, whaddayaknow, you actually did give it to us! But did you really need to do that evil cliffhanger? That was pure evil!! To say that the last sentence made me kick and scream would be a huge understatement.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is sooooooooo good!!! That chapter was definitely worth the wait. It's good to see that Naruto's back although a bit on the negative side, but it's still better than before. Hweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.... I'm so excited! It's 2:30 in the morning and I'm all hyper and perky. Heehee... You really are my favorite Naruto fanfic author!!! Thank you sooooo much for sharing your talent. ^_______________________________^

wooops, that last review was left by me. For some very, very strange reason, aff always puts "Anon" in the name field whenever I forget to put my name. Super weird indeed since I don't even know Anon, LOL.

Hi it's me again, LOL. Just one last note, is Mitani really blind?? If Mitani is really Sasuke, then I have a feeling he really isn't XD He may be suffering from hysterical blindness because of all the stuff he's been through but...actually blind?? Hmm..

i have really enjoyed reading this story so far. ooohhhh!!!! and now iam curious about whats going to happen next. is the mystery guy sasuke and if so is he really blind? must have more soon, please :)

Well as blatently obvious as I feel all that with "Mitani" was I still hate you. >.< Your chapters are amazingly long and I don't know how you do it but how could you possible leave it there!? *screams* You are a really good writter, I can definatly say that without pause, I started reading this month's ago but when you stopped updating I stopped looking for updates, but when I saw it up with two more chapters I jumped on it, I don't think I've picked up a story I've dropped before this one. As for constructive criticism (Because you said you wanted it) I don't think it's nessisary to put breaks when you just change points of view in the same scene, I think it's only nessisary when you change scene's completely. That's just my opinion though, I can't really offer up anything on the writting itself because it's by far the best I've read on AFF. Anyway, a review wouldn't be complete without an, "Update soon!!!"

~Hawk

Update please!
I miss Sasuke ;_;!

Eeeh, I must wonder if he's uke or seme though XD;; Me and my curiosities~ uke, please XD!

Omg.
This is soooo good. I can't wait until the next chapter comes up!!! The second 'Mitani' had shown up, I thought, "no....it couldn't be...."
You've done a really good job on this. I enjoy reading it.

>.< i'm not really the biggest fan of OCs, plus the lack of sasuke! it also seems to show a hint of narusaku...-.- (which i am NOT fond of, AT ALL) ok, all i ask from you is, PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS NARUSAKU, AND I BEG OF YOU TO NOT KILL SASUKE OFF!! other than that, YOU MUST CONTINUE~~!!!!! ^___^

Oh my god. You have to continue with this, Im begging you to. It's the best fic I've read in a long long time! Im addicted. I love your styles, i can't say much (im not a good reviewer) but I really really really need to read more. I want Naruto to be ok godamnit. I godamn started to cry!
Anyway, Please carry on, Its a fantasic fic. Really.
xxxxx

Sounds to me that Mitani is Sasuke. God I hope I'm right. But why cant he see? And why didn't she notice before that it was him? That is, if it is him?
I hope she can convince her grandmother. Naruto needs to be saved! At least he finally has some sort of movement. (That bastard noble needs to die a painfull death!!) And thank goodness he is mostly himself again. I cant wait for Naruto and Sasuke to find each other again! This was really a good chapter, and I cant wait for the next update. Hope that its soon! Really, you have me aching to know more! Ja ne!