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for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

by Tsukineko9

person puriin
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aiii!! I've been suspecting it but didn't realize it would actually be true! XD Well, thank you for updating with such a lovely (and long! X3) chapter. All the previous angst really got me down, and to see Naruto fight back and be almost normal ..yay! The relationship between Sakura and Naruto is cute too; refreshing to see them getting along with each other rather than bitch!Sakura, etc portrayed in some other S/N fics. Eagerly awaiting the next installment! =)
person angel of darkness
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i knew it was sasuke!!! hahahah lol cant wait to read their reactions!!!! omg this story is awesome!!!!!!
person anon
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter! i think someone's been found... i wonder what's coming next!
person limelikelemon
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is wow O___O
I adore your writing-style, 'cause it shows everyones emotion and thoughts....
What i really like about it is how you "changed" naruto, now that he's in chains....he seems so distant and untouchable compared to the earlier chapters.
....you even made me like sakura XD she's cool headed and collected - at least most of the time- if it hadn't been for her the whole village would haven been roasted by now...and....gimme sasuke back, please???.....err....

In short: The story is great. It has everything from fluff to angst. Just how we like it, ne? Go on!!

~lime
person angel of darkness
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-sniffs- naru gone insane!!!! -grinz evilly- its actually quite humorous how he reacts to them al and his fights with kyuubi those are priceless, great job on the story so far ^_^
person MoJo JessJo
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this story very much. The only thing that I'm having a little trouble with is sometimes the changes in POV are a little jarring and a little hard to decipher sometimes as to who's POV it is. The characterization is very well done and the plot is something that I have not seen a lot of. Please write more soon.
person Silver Star
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I just totally love it.. and it's so sweet. But.. I suggest that when you switch POVs, do you think you could somehow.. I dunno, like put who's saying what, because once in a while, when you're totally into it, you kinda lose track of who's who, then you have to go back a bit to refresh your memory. ^^ But seriously, other than that, I can't think of anything wrong. Keep up the good work!
person liena
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story, it is incredibly well written! In my opinion, the structure and plot of _Reflections_ far surpasses that of the majority of the works of literature hosted on this site. The chapters are impressively long and engaging! The only thing I can think to say is "keep up the good work!" I anxiously await your next update.
person Luna
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, can this be one of the best stories I have ever read??? And HOW LONG have I been waiting for an update??? *tears stream down face* Dude it's been too long I gotta know what happens in the story.......keep up the good work though. I have read all your stories so far - well done!!! *big smiles*
person Kittie
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't know if this counts as constructive, but I really like the way you've set the story up. It changes perspective enough that you always know what's going on from everyone's PoV, but it's still easy to tell who it is. I really hope to see another update soon, and once this is done, more stories. ^^