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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is mean!
Looking every now & then to see whether u had updated the story and now, after reading it I just feel extremely angry!!!
How could you leave me like this? It's just not fair. I demand the next chap now!!!
Jokes apart (although in fact that's very true), the chapter is incredibly catchy & thrilling.
The only problem is that, maybe, it turns out too long without a continuation. I mean, it's a little uneventful. But I'm sure I feel this way because I can't read any further. I'm sure that if I had read the story to the very end (which I hope u write soon) I wouldn't have felt this way about it since everyth else is excellent. It was time Sakura got some protagonism!! I like her(yours) much more than in the anime!!
Hope u 2 update soon! (don't torture me with another long wait)
Keep at your good work!!
Looking every now & then to see whether u had updated the story and now, after reading it I just feel extremely angry!!!
How could you leave me like this? It's just not fair. I demand the next chap now!!!
Jokes apart (although in fact that's very true), the chapter is incredibly catchy & thrilling.
The only problem is that, maybe, it turns out too long without a continuation. I mean, it's a little uneventful. But I'm sure I feel this way because I can't read any further. I'm sure that if I had read the story to the very end (which I hope u write soon) I wouldn't have felt this way about it since everyth else is excellent. It was time Sakura got some protagonism!! I like her(yours) much more than in the anime!!
Hope u 2 update soon! (don't torture me with another long wait)
Keep at your good work!!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoooo! *glomps* You started writing again!!!! insofar as constructive crit... Well, I dont have all that much to offer. Youre handling Naruto's personality exceptionally well, as well as Tsunade's. My only complaint MIGHT be Sakura, just because of the way the whole "caring" thing just came out of nowhere, but that in and of itself is understandable, so I dont think it counts as a complaint. Sakura's under a lot of stress. Not only has Sasuke disappeared, and is most likely dead, the teammate she has relied on, has been saved by, and has taken for granted has effectivly lost it. Thats enough to break a lot of paradigms. In short, good job! This better count as a real review!!! *laughs* Continue!
Much luv and many cookies,
Natakamani
Much luv and many cookies,
Natakamani
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought you two quit writing. I'm glad you didn't, this
chapter rocked and the next part should be posted as
quickly as possible, long with your other stories.
chapter rocked and the next part should be posted as
quickly as possible, long with your other stories.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blink* Wow....that went from totally amazing to soooooo depressing in about 15 seconds flat! ^^ I....ummm.....well, I scanned the last chapter you have posted, but I couldn't bring myself to read it because, to be quite frank, I really don't feel like being drepressed for the next coupla' days. And yeah, that would happen, because your story is so good that it would effect me like that..... ^^ Therefore, I will read the last chapter when you post the next one, k? Because I really do love this fic, and it is quite well done, so I'm gonna' have to finish it eventually!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work on this and on Spartan Ninjas, and update ASAP!!!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your sentence construction and useage of words rocks. They capture the interest immediatly. I apologize for my innability to spell. You really had Sakura mature in this chapter too it's good to see. Naruto is really out of it but I like that fact that your showing Kyuubi and what he has to say. Not sure if this is what you wanted to hear but I enjoy your story.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost cried reading chapter 5, its so horrible the way they are treating Naruto, they have no right at all. And poor Shika being burned for wanting to help. And I really hope that Sasuke is still holding on to life somehow, Naruto needs him. Stupid brat bastard should die for what he's doing to Naruto
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fare warning I cannot spell.
I love the flow that you have going. It is nice to see what each side is thinking as they grow closer. I'm not sure why you have the nine tail's actual words, unless it is to express tha growing control/influence he has. I like how the only reson Sakura is able to get close is because he does not trust her. Building back lost grownd like this os going to be hard, but she has a good approch. I wonder if the rokie nine will brake Naruto out once they hear about the exicution orders.
I love the flow that you have going. It is nice to see what each side is thinking as they grow closer. I'm not sure why you have the nine tail's actual words, unless it is to express tha growing control/influence he has. I like how the only reson Sakura is able to get close is because he does not trust her. Building back lost grownd like this os going to be hard, but she has a good approch. I wonder if the rokie nine will brake Naruto out once they hear about the exicution orders.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
arrgh!!! i wish that you would just kill off that stupid noble son of a $%#!!!!!!
naruto doesnt deserve that kind of treatment! sakura should just set him free so he could search for sasuke for himself.
and sasuke cant be dead!!! he cant!! please let them find him so they could take him back to naruto!! naruto needs him!!
waaaa!!!! this story really is breaking my heart! i sooo need to find out what happens next. will the stupid nobles realize what they are doing to naruto??
will they let him go?? are they going to still demand his death?? nooo!! i dont want to know that last one! i want i happy story!! a happy ending!!
you have me so caught up in this story that you have me ranting!! that hardly ever happens with me. okay i'll let you go before i ramble on more.
update soon!!!!
naruto doesnt deserve that kind of treatment! sakura should just set him free so he could search for sasuke for himself.
and sasuke cant be dead!!! he cant!! please let them find him so they could take him back to naruto!! naruto needs him!!
waaaa!!!! this story really is breaking my heart! i sooo need to find out what happens next. will the stupid nobles realize what they are doing to naruto??
will they let him go?? are they going to still demand his death?? nooo!! i dont want to know that last one! i want i happy story!! a happy ending!!
you have me so caught up in this story that you have me ranting!! that hardly ever happens with me. okay i'll let you go before i ramble on more.
update soon!!!!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! welcome back! thought you went and died on me...but you came back with this story. when i saw it was updated, my mouth hung open for a little bit. i was so happy and surprised to see you back. yay!
as for the story, it's as good as it was back then. it's sad what happened to sasuke and naruto, but i'm still rooting for them. i hope next chapter tell us if they find sasuke so we can all live happily ever after...or something like that^_^V
as for the story, it's as good as it was back then. it's sad what happened to sasuke and naruto, but i'm still rooting for them. i hope next chapter tell us if they find sasuke so we can all live happily ever after...or something like that^_^V
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, how long has it been since you up'd last? I started from the very beginning just to refresh my memory on everything *has a really bad memory anyways:p* but everything came back quick enough and i was so engrossed by re-reading it i continued all the way through to the new up'd. my eyes are very unhappy with me ^__~ and it's no wonder w/ ch 5 being 31 pages long! your page lengths rival w/ ladygizarme's!!! *find her on ff and mm, soon to be appearing on aff*
anyway, wow...just wow. and poor naru! they totally have him locked up like the animal they think he is which is so unfair. sakura who finally came to terms over the way she treated him in the past is great and i can see you're gonna take a long time gettin him to trust her again.
when you had sakura say 'she'd take care of it' about the girl ninja when she looked at the horse, i was really hopin you were going to drag her not put her on the horse...would've served her right. that was a noble thing sasuke did savin her life, but heart-renching knowing he would fall. And all the stabs to the stomach! He's no Naru, he can't heal like him...I wasn't going to be surprised if this was the last chap, but thankfully it's not :D
gotta love how you always have 'my lord bastard' pissin his pants everytime Naru gets pissed off and taps into Kyuubi. i think the way he is portrayed more people hate him than kyuubi or orochimaru.
i'm very happy to hear you're going to dedicate your time to finishing this fic up first before you move on to your others. how many more chaps do you think are left to Reflections? Hopefully quite a few more! You're writing abilities are spectacular and you've got a great imagination. major kudos! get that next chap up soon so i don't die of boredom!
~Houseki
anyway, wow...just wow. and poor naru! they totally have him locked up like the animal they think he is which is so unfair. sakura who finally came to terms over the way she treated him in the past is great and i can see you're gonna take a long time gettin him to trust her again.
when you had sakura say 'she'd take care of it' about the girl ninja when she looked at the horse, i was really hopin you were going to drag her not put her on the horse...would've served her right. that was a noble thing sasuke did savin her life, but heart-renching knowing he would fall. And all the stabs to the stomach! He's no Naru, he can't heal like him...I wasn't going to be surprised if this was the last chap, but thankfully it's not :D
gotta love how you always have 'my lord bastard' pissin his pants everytime Naru gets pissed off and taps into Kyuubi. i think the way he is portrayed more people hate him than kyuubi or orochimaru.
i'm very happy to hear you're going to dedicate your time to finishing this fic up first before you move on to your others. how many more chaps do you think are left to Reflections? Hopefully quite a few more! You're writing abilities are spectacular and you've got a great imagination. major kudos! get that next chap up soon so i don't die of boredom!
~Houseki