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DUDE. YOU FINALLY UPDATED. o_o Okay. Ive been reading your fan fic for a while now, and Im totally obsessed with it as of now. That last chapter was just plain powerful :D Just know, Ive had your story bookmarked for a while hoping for your updated cause damn... the previous chapter was such a cliffhanger x_X Even this one is xD MUST FIND OUT WHAT NARUTO WILL SAY TO SASUKE.... Soooo update soon! <3 ^^

Woooah. Um, just give me a sec to properly digest that... wooooah. Heh, I'll be a little more explicit now. I read the whole thing in one go... (both a good idea and a bad idea. Bad cause I was totally supposed to be working, and good cause it's soooo good I couldn't stop...) and wow. Seriously, I'm really really really liking this story.

I like how you've structured it so far, it starts out in Konoha, with the festival and how badly everyone treats Naruto, and progresses to the mission. And now.. man, shit has totally hit the fan. I enjoy it cause it seems so very realistic. It seems so likely that the canon could turn into something like this, you have all sorts of elements that really make it like this could actually happen. I particularly like the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto, they are really such a good pair.. specially for each other. Not mushy, and yet they feel so strongly for one another. You seriously have me believing what you're writing, I'm very impressed.

This last chapter has completley thrown me for a loop. Definitely did not expect that to happen.. As you might expect, I am completely on edge with that cliffhanger, I kept watching the scroll bar and hoping it wouldn't reach the end before I found out more.. Specially since everythings so uncertain now. Wow.

Heh, sorry if this review isn't quite flowing all that well, I'm still totally thrown by this last chapter. Heh, very good, but obviously anticipation is now there for the next chapter. Don't let that make you think I want to rush you. I would never be rude enough to demand you hurry up, cause I know real life often interferes with writing. I just hope you'll get all 31 reviews sooner than later.. heh. Anyway, just wanted to drop a line and say really good story here.. even if it did take like 300 words to say it..

I really like the fact that your chaps are long, but not the time between update's. When are we going to see how the search is going? Please, don't make us wait forever for them to find Sas and bring him back, and please don't let Oro have him! I can't stand to see Nar so down, you are doing a very good job, but the sooner you get rid of the little jerky prick the better, maybe let him be totally humiliated first though!

Well, it's hard to give constructive critisism, becasue there isn't that much to critisise. Well, I'll try.
Naruto like this is making me depressed... is the seal weakening or something?
Oh, I have one little complaint. I miss the changing over of perspectives. This keeps one perspective almost throughout the whole chapter. I miss all the different inputs on one situation.
I'm afraid that's the best I can do for now. I really love this story, and I'm glad that you've got over the writers block. It's such a bitch.

HEY!!! Omg I like freakishly love this story! it's kinda sad about Naru-chan going insane!!! (IF YOU HURT SASUKE I WILL KILL YOU!!!)^.^ yay-ness, do update soon! this thing was 31 freggin pages? my story isn't even that long and its in like chapter7 *Cries* anyways. Plz don't let Naru-chan be hurt anymore, i already wanna cry! *cuddles Naru-chan... walks away burnt to a crisp*it was worth it^.^
~Ja Nae

Wow. It took me HOURS (about five) to read this fic to the ending you left it. I love the fic. Keep up the most awesome work. Coolsa.

The emotions are written out very well, and it really affects the reader. I know this because when Naruto was angry, I wanted to scream because I felt frustrated all of the sudden, and when Sakura wanted to help Naruto, I felt really stressed for some reason, sad. Weird weird..I know =_=''..But it's the feelings are explained very well and thoroughly. The description is really great, not that confusing. Each character's personality and the change over time with them is written cool too. When Junichiro's perspective is explained though, makes you just want to slap him, >_>''. I never thought that there would be such a dislikable character but I guess there is...I want to maim Junichiro >_>. One chapter is REALLY long, but it's nice cause you separate it with the different paragraphs and there are very good transitions. The thing I've noticed the most though was the changes in perspective and how it's split up like that :D, that's really cool. The only thing that might confuse people when they read this is when the dialogue is in the same paragraph; since one chapter is long, and the paragraphs are thick, it'll look cramped.

Overall, I think this is the best story ever and that's cool that you updated :]. Good luck with the next chapter ^^ *Gives full support on writing and continuation and hopes that she's somehow helped out* Sorry if my review was really long ^^;;.

P.S. I think I made a doujin page of one part in the story ._. it was when Naruto and Sasuke were having the pillow fight ^^''.

whoa!! an update after months of waiting! you have no idea how fast i clicked on the link the moment i saw that you updated! Wee...i think i've read the first 4 chapters at least 5 times while waiting for the 5th chapter. and what do i get? such depressing moments?!??! hee..im not angry, lol. just really sad. man, i mean poor naruto. haaaa...i wonder where sasuke is? please don't tell me he's really dead! or else, oh no. i can't have naruto continue like this. it's just really heartbreaking. well, i hope you won't suffer from major writer's block anytime soon coz i really wanna know what happens next. fabulous writing as usual (the extra long chapter made me happy too). this chapter really moved me. thank you very much for writing it.

Never before have i been this depressed/sadden by a story.
The way that you wrote Naruto as he is in the cell is so heart wreching it brought me to tears.
Naruto aguring with Kyuubi was totally on the spot, and with Naruto thinking everyone is lieing to him made sence
with how the village always betraded and hurt him way would he believe what they are saying.
I hope the Sasuke is found alive and hopfully Orochimaru did get him.
Also what the nobiles wouldn't have Naruto kill once they see him though the glass.
I really love your story so far and i hope that you will update this story soon.
I'm hoping for a happy ending because if it turns out with Sasuke died and Naruto being killed and you writing it
I don't know if i will stop crying(i still haven't stop for this chapter sorry for any typos)
Until Next Time
~Gara

As Naruto is a pretty large fandom, it can often be really hard to find any fanfictions of good quality. I consider this fic to be one of those select few. Its really deep and I think you have both Naruto and Sasuke down wonderfully. Though I do diagree a little with your high expectations of reviews just 'cause 31 does seem a lot to wait for before the next chapter for those that have reviewed and are waiting on edge for the next chapter. There's no gurantee for those waiting that there will be that many people reviewing so it makes one a bit nervous. But hey, its your story.

Anyways, the big inner turmoil that Naruto is going through in this chapter is really deep and emotional. I like the fact that you spent a lot of time focusing on just one part because it allows for a lot of development of Naruto's character here. And it also just makes the reader feel really sad for him and REALLY want to know what happened to poor Sasuke (which is why this chapter is so evil because we really have no idea, on the same page as Naruto at the time really). And Sakura definently deserved the reactions she got out of him considering how long she has acted so poorly towards him and now expects it to be different when obviously Naruto has not forgotten her previous behavior towards him. I certainly hope Sasuke comes back to save Naruto's sanity from Kyuubi. I worry about those two. You certainly like to torture them a lot in this fic. XP

I really do love this fic though its a bit disapointing that you put your expectations up so high. Makes you sound a tad bit on the snobby side which is unfortunate considering how wonderful your fic is. But I really think you should just write it for yourselves and not base it on other people's reactions and opinions because you should write it if you enjoy it, not because you want to get lots of reviews. Sometimes a few meaningful reviews are worth a lot more than a lot of people forcing a review because chances are they dont' really mean what they say and are just sucking up to you in order to get the next chapter out.