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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is one of the most interesting stories I've read thus far in ths fandom. I'm sure what have been needed to be said, has already been said, but I'll just add that I was surprised at how the Kyuubi is acting. I had thought that he was getting along better with Naruto, not trying to make him fall over the cliff! The way you have Sakura acting is wonderful, from the beginning of the story to know, she seems to have done a lot of growing up. I'm not quite sure if I like how you've characterized Tsunade yet, but I suppose I'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out!
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Though it pain's me to even think of Naruto in that state, i'm enjoying it. What was Sasuke's reason for saving the girl and not himself I dont really see him as the self sacrificing type except maybe with those he is closest to, also would'nt he be especially determined to survive now that he had Naruto?
I have to say you are doing a wonerful job with my lord bastard I truly hate him ,and consider any character that can inspire real emotions a success and
pleasurable to read
I know that you said not to but i'll ask anyway's
please update soon
I have to say you are doing a wonerful job with my lord bastard I truly hate him ,and consider any character that can inspire real emotions a success and
pleasurable to read
I know that you said not to but i'll ask anyway's
please update soon
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooo!!!! not a cliff hanger!!!!! is naruto going to jump in after him too??? will he save him in time???? this is just too much for me to take in!! must know what happens next! the suspense is killing!!!!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell! You rock! The story is wonderful and I absolutely adore it (along with all your other fics). You are my idols! *bows and worships the almighty writers* I am awaiting th next chapter!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story!! They're so good charachterized! (<-this word did even exist? ?_?;) Keep on the writing you rulez! >B )
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story. I like how it is developing.
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First, I have to just say i'm awed by your work. It is beautiful. I have hardly seen many people who can portray the characters just the way they want. Your grammar is wonderful, and your plotline leaves nothing to be desired. I think it was great of you two to collaborate on this. It has worked very well and I wait in ernest for your next chapter. Goodluck.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update!! I love what you have so far, but even though cliff hangers are fun, they do just torture us readers. I know it takes a time to write a story of this caliber, but please update as soon as you can *beg on hands and knees*. Thank you for your hard work.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Take your time with the chapters, as long as they keep up the absolutely stunning perfection that they are now.
I can't find words that describe how perfect this fic is... it's absolutely amazing. Just really... wow.
The characters are perfectly in character, the descriptiveness is exact and the POV changes are leaving me gasping at the perfect icing on the cake. I can barely believe that there is such an amazing fic in this world, it's heaven to read.
I'll be checking every hour for an update, and I'm going to reccomend it to every SasuNaru fan I know.
This fic is as close to perfection as I could ever imagine. I'm off to read the rest of your fics, I think I'll faint if they're any better than this.
I can't find words that describe how perfect this fic is... it's absolutely amazing. Just really... wow.
The characters are perfectly in character, the descriptiveness is exact and the POV changes are leaving me gasping at the perfect icing on the cake. I can barely believe that there is such an amazing fic in this world, it's heaven to read.
I'll be checking every hour for an update, and I'm going to reccomend it to every SasuNaru fan I know.
This fic is as close to perfection as I could ever imagine. I'm off to read the rest of your fics, I think I'll faint if they're any better than this.
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm re-reading this story for the umteenth time. Can you update it soon? Please? Pretty please?