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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowies! I luff! I can't wait till the next chappie! Hopefuly Sasuke will be able to finish what he started... Tee hee ^^
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaai!!! Such a lovely story. I love how it's done. The Kyuubi thing is very interesting as well. I bet it's just sexual frustration from not being able to do anything/much for 18 years.
Well I'll definitely keep watching this story...
Well I'll definitely keep watching this story...
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations!!
Never before did I read such a long story of this kind! And I just say long in compartion, but, in fact, I'm just thrilled to read more!! I just can't wait for the next chapter to be updated!!
I started reading the story from the 2nd or 3rd chapter, just wanting it to cut to the chase, but after a little time had to start reading it from the very beggining!! It's just so... everything!
At first, the doble-POVed style confused me a little, but I gradually get used to it, moreover, now I find it's just excellent; it's just great to know what both characters are thinking, and besides, it gives the chance for the reader to feel as if you were either Naruto or Sasuke, and not just the one whose only POV would be shown if you had chosen another style. Great job!
There's no Naruto without fox. And your fox is also great. I love that you left what he says to tour imagination, and just wrote Naruto's replies. Sometimes I couldn't stop laughing at its thoughts and teases!! Will Naruto give in to its demands in the end? Don't tell me!!
Naruto's and Sasuke's personality are very well done! Of course they have to be different in some way to the "real" ones, but you two made those differences fit perfectly to their original characters, so you easily recognise them. Naruto's need for acceptance and Sasuke's longing for love are so delicious!! And thanks you kept their usual "real" banter; they wouldn't just be themselves without it! I also like the way they help each other, now Naruto helps Sasuke, then the other way around, it's so tender... I also love when Sasuke waits for Naruto to act first, and..., and... (I don't want to bore you)
The sex scenes are just so sexy and a total turn-on. They are so explicit and still so intimate. I die to see it at "level 2". There's so much implied, things you don't read but you are told along the whole story... It's all so expressive and feelings-filled! It's great they don't just free their insticts at once and go little by little... the more it takes the more pleasant (just to write a soft word) it will be, and still not lingering too much.
It's so good I cannot think about anything bad to say about it, maybe just the fact that I have to wait for the next chapter(s) to be written...
Great job, keep at the good work. Thank you, Cecilia & Kirei, for your imagination.
P.S.: Since I read your story I haven't read any other Naruto fic, neither want to, because I don't want my actual conception of your characters to fade away. For me, they are the real Naruto and Sasuke and I don't want to read about fake ones!
By the way, when comes the next (5th) chapter? I'm just so anxious!!
(I'm Spanish and maybe I couldn't express what I think fairly enough in English, put it like this, multiply what I've just written by a hundred or more and that's what I really feel about your story)
Never before did I read such a long story of this kind! And I just say long in compartion, but, in fact, I'm just thrilled to read more!! I just can't wait for the next chapter to be updated!!
I started reading the story from the 2nd or 3rd chapter, just wanting it to cut to the chase, but after a little time had to start reading it from the very beggining!! It's just so... everything!
At first, the doble-POVed style confused me a little, but I gradually get used to it, moreover, now I find it's just excellent; it's just great to know what both characters are thinking, and besides, it gives the chance for the reader to feel as if you were either Naruto or Sasuke, and not just the one whose only POV would be shown if you had chosen another style. Great job!
There's no Naruto without fox. And your fox is also great. I love that you left what he says to tour imagination, and just wrote Naruto's replies. Sometimes I couldn't stop laughing at its thoughts and teases!! Will Naruto give in to its demands in the end? Don't tell me!!
Naruto's and Sasuke's personality are very well done! Of course they have to be different in some way to the "real" ones, but you two made those differences fit perfectly to their original characters, so you easily recognise them. Naruto's need for acceptance and Sasuke's longing for love are so delicious!! And thanks you kept their usual "real" banter; they wouldn't just be themselves without it! I also like the way they help each other, now Naruto helps Sasuke, then the other way around, it's so tender... I also love when Sasuke waits for Naruto to act first, and..., and... (I don't want to bore you)
The sex scenes are just so sexy and a total turn-on. They are so explicit and still so intimate. I die to see it at "level 2". There's so much implied, things you don't read but you are told along the whole story... It's all so expressive and feelings-filled! It's great they don't just free their insticts at once and go little by little... the more it takes the more pleasant (just to write a soft word) it will be, and still not lingering too much.
It's so good I cannot think about anything bad to say about it, maybe just the fact that I have to wait for the next chapter(s) to be written...
Great job, keep at the good work. Thank you, Cecilia & Kirei, for your imagination.
P.S.: Since I read your story I haven't read any other Naruto fic, neither want to, because I don't want my actual conception of your characters to fade away. For me, they are the real Naruto and Sasuke and I don't want to read about fake ones!
By the way, when comes the next (5th) chapter? I'm just so anxious!!
(I'm Spanish and maybe I couldn't express what I think fairly enough in English, put it like this, multiply what I've just written by a hundred or more and that's what I really feel about your story)
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh... My... God... I just read everything you ahve so far in one sitting... I about to cry because there isn't another chapter. This is by far the best fanFiction I've EVER read, and I like to think I've read quite a few. Part of it may be due to my love of SasuNaru, I don't know, it's amazing though and I hope you update again soon! Believe you me, I'll be bookmarking it and checking everyday for updates!!!
~Hawkmun
~Hawkmun
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weeee! hope they'll all survive the attack and be back to the fire country in no time for some hot action ;D lol. i love the story!!!
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooh.... they where taken by surprise! where is Sasuke now? hey, did his hand bones healed that fast? is he ok? having a whole in your chest must be very unconfortable... and hurting. will the fox fight? will naruto get him back? where are those ninjas taking him? I know that to Orochimaru, but where exactly? what's going on!!!
I hope you update soon! I really want to know!! this chapter was SO exciting! I really want to read more!!
please update soon!
I hope you update soon! I really want to know!! this chapter was SO exciting! I really want to read more!!
please update soon!
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!
I've read the other chapters already and I have to tell you that I just LOVE your story! it's bloody fantastic! haha.
It's pretty interesting how both of them have something inside them that is dangerous and trying to take over. in Naruto's case... well, I can see that the Kyubi kind of respects Naruto's private matters... you know, Sasuke and himself, so perhaps he sees the Uchiha like some kind of mate? who knows a demon's way of thinking?
but talking about the brunet... what about his injury? wasn't his hand broken? doesn't it hurt anymore? is Naruto's healed already? when are they going to finish this mission? are they going to find Gaara? Naruto may be find with the kid, but the fox hates the other demon, right? I wonder how this encounter will follow. I hope Naruto accepts Sasuke and his feelings... as well as his OWN feelings.
I'll continue reading the next chapter. I hope you keep on updating soon!
I've read the other chapters already and I have to tell you that I just LOVE your story! it's bloody fantastic! haha.
It's pretty interesting how both of them have something inside them that is dangerous and trying to take over. in Naruto's case... well, I can see that the Kyubi kind of respects Naruto's private matters... you know, Sasuke and himself, so perhaps he sees the Uchiha like some kind of mate? who knows a demon's way of thinking?
but talking about the brunet... what about his injury? wasn't his hand broken? doesn't it hurt anymore? is Naruto's healed already? when are they going to finish this mission? are they going to find Gaara? Naruto may be find with the kid, but the fox hates the other demon, right? I wonder how this encounter will follow. I hope Naruto accepts Sasuke and his feelings... as well as his OWN feelings.
I'll continue reading the next chapter. I hope you keep on updating soon!
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story guys. I read and reviewed it on your website too.
Keep it up.
Keep it up.
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Guh. I can't believe I haven't reviewed this before; I must apologize for that. I absolutely LOVE this story. Love the little comments the Kyuubi no Kitsune gives Naruto, love the way Sasuke fearlessly addresses the Fox, and I especially love how long the chapters are. It makes waiting for updates worth it. But, you know, I was thinking...and I think the flow of the story is kind of going that way...that the Kyuubi should, of course with Naruto's influence, become territorial and possessive over Sasuke. Because the last thing that happened, at the end of chapter four, was "the Kyuubi's cry mixing with Naruto's" and it was Sasuke's name they were both yelling.... *shrugs* Just a thought.
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaaaa!!! that is my favorite chapter so far. Naruto was so cute when he was thinking it was all a dream. heeheehee...that was awesome! Such a sweet moment...awww.. i couldn't get over it *checks teeth for major cavities* XD
I thought it was such a smart move to skip the actual GaaraxNaruto battle and go right ahead and write about what happened after. Fight scenes are pretty hard to write in my opinion, and you avoided that trouble successfully!!! And that NaruSasu moment after the battle is just priceless ^^ Heeheeehee...your writing is just awesome.
I love this story so much, I think I've read everything three times now. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Thank you so much for writing this.
I thought it was such a smart move to skip the actual GaaraxNaruto battle and go right ahead and write about what happened after. Fight scenes are pretty hard to write in my opinion, and you avoided that trouble successfully!!! And that NaruSasu moment after the battle is just priceless ^^ Heeheeehee...your writing is just awesome.
I love this story so much, I think I've read everything three times now. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Thank you so much for writing this.