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I dont review lots, but your story is incredible! Out of the many fics I've read, this has been one of the ones that has best kept my ADD's attention!! I'm happy to know that some writers have the ability to create a STORY instead of pure smut, and your development of the characters is impressive ^^ I await your chapters eagerly, lol, so post!!! Peas and carrots, plzthx, and... oh goddammit, WRITE, WOMAN, WRITE! XP

WOW. I think my eyes are burning in that bad sort of i've-been-on-the-computer-way-too-long way, but it was totally worth it. Your plot is fantastic and my god, you capture everything about the ninjas' personalities that everyone loves and craves!!!!!! And your chapters are so loong! GAH, one of THE best stories i have frickin ever read, rock on you crazy thing!

God! Will Naruto just say "I love you too" to Sasuke already!!!

The story would be much better if you would stop switching the point of view so often. Just simply *reducing* them would be an improvement. I like the story a lot but it's giving me a headache!

OMG! that was sooooo good! DAMN LORD'S SON! that prank was realli great! :) PLEASE PLEASE update again soon!

WOW. i want chapter 3 NOW! this is lovely, wonderful writing, which is not always present in a fan fic. but you are obviously very talented in this regard, and i love the way sasuke is portrayed. i think you do a good job of showing the insecure side that led to so much of his drama. now GIVE US MORE! >.< i have a feeling that when you DO get to the NC-17 portion of this story, it's going to be very emotional and intense. i can't wait! ;-)

Wow...f'ing amazing. I was glued to the screen til it was done,I did not even move for a smoke,if that gives you any clue how utterly enthralled I was. Character handling...timing..humour...pathos...the entire "take" on our fav ninjas just got way upped.... the standard of excellence, readability.. for yaoi/whatever takes on "Naruto".[I would say all takes on Naruto but I've read mostly stories with a sexual turn in them,uhh any sex,] It is dripping hot too and ,gasp, nothing flagrant has happened or I would probably be saying it was the best I have read.It is sooo close to perfect I expect the ampage to just keep..rising.
Keep the motor running, you rock.
Chris

Gorgeous fic you have in the works. I love they way you throw in humor in almost everything. like "I'm being antisocial, go away" made me chuckle for a long time. The comic relief always makes me smile or giggle with glee. Both Sasuke and Naruto are so well in character, and I love how you switch PoV from time to time. Keep working, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I read this on Christmas day, which made it even better. I hope Sasuke will be fine, and that the Firelord dies a long and painful death. *grin* Thank you for such a wonderful fic, and keep up the good work. Ja ne.

*mouth gaping* wow.... that was.... amazing!!! thank you so much for updating! this chapter was great! i love your story soooooo much! and it is so great how the chapters are sooooooo long! keep up the good work! and the fast updating! see ya next chapter!

WRITE MORE!!!!!! It was awesome!!!!