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for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

by Tsukineko9

person S
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loving the all ur work keep up the good work
person ChrisKaz
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW! That last part was just so sad and beautiful! That Sasuke might die, and that Naruto loves him so much that he would follow him into death; now that's true love! Simply beautifully written! I really love this story, and all the others of yours that I've written. Say, what if I review by myself 75 times, and say something different or comment on the story each time, will that count as 75 reviews so you'll update? Please? Darn, I don't think that will work for you, but email if it does, cause then I will! (But boy, that'll take a while!) I guess I shouldn't say too much in this one in case I have to use these comments in other reviews. But this is such an amazing story! I love it! I really like how your chapters are so long; provides lots of meat to sate my appetite. I think it was great how you had the suspense of Sasuke's discovery intermingled with Naruto's going ons. It shows that things were happening while Sasuke was missing, and it really reflected on how much had changed after he was found. There's so much character development goin on, I don't know how you keep up with it all. I'd be lost if I was writing it, but I'm glad I'm not, cause I would just bungle this awesome storyline! You two are both totally amazing writers, and I look forward to reading any new updates or new saga storys! Thanks so much for writing and providing readers with such an enjoyable read! Love, Christine.
person AJ
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, not even I am that cruel, you are being a bit unreasonable, you should write for yourself not for others, if you want people to see it, let them, don't make rules. But heya that's just me. Pretty good story.
person LathainZeal
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was amazing.

I don't want to rant and rave about your review policy, suffice to say that I think you seemed a bit harsh in mentioning that you wanted seventy-five reviews this time.

Characterization was spot on. Although, the falling off the cliff and getting amnesia was like something out of a soap-opera. I laughed, which is most likely not how you'd intended the scene to go.

Sasuke's recovery seems a little fairy-tale-ish to me, but considering the depth of his and Naruto's relationship, it's not beyond the realm of possibility.

All in all, the good points are abundant, and carry that elusive, unidentifiable quality that makes me say "This is a damn good story." and yet leave me unable to clarify why I think that.

Definetly looking forward to more, and here's hoping it's not abandoned. It's been, what, nine months now? I'm not sure what the normal schedule is like at all though, so, that could be a commonplace period of time between updates.

~LZ
person Adrienne
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I very much hope you continue with this story. Its been hard to find really, REALLY great SasuNaru fics. I actually stayed up until four thirty in the morning last night just so I could read as much as possible. Its now one in the morning today (I only found the story a day ago!!!), so I've been devoting a lot of time to it.

Pleae continue and keep up with the wonderful work. The characterization is brilliant. Naruto is an engaging character, and I'm glad to see how you've developed Sakura into a more well-rounded, less obnoxious character. I've not been a fan of hers in the anime, but you are doing wonders with her in this story.

:-D
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope you continue to update this story! Please do! Its one of the few stories that have long chapters with /plot/ ... among other things... happening in it!
person innerchild
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my last review was rushed and crappy, so i wanted to redo it. i'm really falling in love with this story. in some parts i just want to cry... which is saying alot. i'm not one to cry for stories. this story has also kept me on the edge of my seat. i never saw some of the things you put in there coming. never in a million years. i just hope taht everything goes alright with the surgery... or i really might cry. man, this thing is addicting like a soap opra, except better. hope you update soon.

-innerchild
person innerchild
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story so far. i hope you update soon. sorry it's so short, but i gotta jet.
person Sam
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At times I wanted to cry and others I laughed so hard I choked. This fan-fic is by far the best I've read in a while!
person Miyoko
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I reall LOVE this story. Although I have to say the constant shift from one POV to another getting a little confusing but it's a unique twist and I like it very much. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks so very very much!