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I LOVE THIS STORY!

I have been looking for a really good Sasu/Naru for a long time, and your story is the best i've come across. It's so heartwrenching and I can't take my eyes off the screen while reading it! I will bookmark it immediately so that I can come back to read the next chapter. Please email me when the next chapter comes out. Some writer suggestions: Try to include more imagery in your writing, especially when dealing with Sasuke's point of view, also remember that Sasuke has to have that surgery eventually!

Sincerly,

Phoenix_Griffen

wow... this story is so beautiful... and i absolutely adore the way it's written in the first person! it's what makes it more special and what gives more intensity to the story! you made me cry so many times that i lost count!! i hope you update soon! kiss kiss ***

Oooh! This story is fantastic! I found it a few days ago, it's taken me forever to catch up, but I finally have! This is a great story. Your doing an amazing job at keeping everyone in character. Wonderful story, I do hope you update soon.

OMGQ This story is the greatest! I love it sooo much, I was like totaly crying at the end of this chapter. 75 reviews? then I'll make sure that everyone of my friends read this fic and leave very, very, very long, wondrous reviews! Update soon!

Wow! What a great story! You two put so much detail into the story! All the buildup, and then Sasuke's gone, and now he's back...talk about gut-wrenching! ...But in a good way. Wonderfully written, you guys are great! I can find no wrong here, so keep on keepin' on with the right! Stuff, that is...:) Eagerly waiting your next update!!!

I have followed this story for a while now and I love it.. never planned on writing a review though, because of my rather bad english, but since you are demanding some and definately deserve them I'll give it a shot. I truly love your Naruto (normally I don't really like him that much) and the situation with the Kyuubi is very interesting. I can't wait to see how it is going to turn out. is it really starting to come under Narutos control? I like the way you are switching the pov's. I thought it would be hard to follow, but you write very clearly and the difference between Naruto and Sasuke is easy to see. Though I love all the twists and turns this story is taking I really want Sasuke back. still it is nice to see a Sasuke without all his horrible memories, though it still is not truly Sasuke. I think I lost even myself there, so I'll give up now. it is a great story and I can't wait to read more.

wow teh end made meh sad....i hope for an update i ish addicdted to this story....

*blinks* Wow. *blinks* Wow. What is this burning sensation at the corner of my eyes. *gasp!* No they are NOT tears! I refuse to tear up at ANYTHING!

Um...okay, besides that. I've actually be following this fic for quite a long time now and you really do have a knack for conjuring up teary scenes (as well as great Kyuubi/Naruto humor moments). This story is a unique work of art, all I have to say (I doubt your other viewers would disagree). Everyone seems to be pretty in character (except Sasuke but that's understandable with all that's happened to the poor blind Uchiha) and I do believe someone needs to beat the pulp out of "my lord bastard", put it back in, then beat it out again. Creating an OC that people really do feel emotions to hate is a sign of a good writer and you two have handled it marvelously.

Hmmm....what else? Oh yes, I hope things work out well for Sasuke and Naruto (poor guys. They've gone through hell and back and it's STILL not enough for them). Good luck on the next chapter! I will await with smiles (and soda).

Holy Crap! I got in #75 and #50 w00t!

Ok your loyal readers ran the gauntlet, I hope we have proven ourselves worthy. Please, please, in the name of all that is good fanfiction post the next chapter! I must know how they deal with the upcoming operation and Sasuke's (probable) upcoming arguments with Naruto as more bits of his memory return right before the operation. I don't want to die of suspense! I've found my other near-death experiences there quite painful and dragged out. Your grammar is great (and there I wouldn't lie, even at the fate of the chapter being held hostage, cause i'm grammatically OCD like that) which is more than i can say for most fics. The plot is amazing and your readers are hooked. Inspiration, we command thee to strike the authoresses POST HASTE!

This is still a heartbreaking story, and the perspectives method you use is still so effective. I'm worried right now, as in, I feel...sympathetic, I guess is the best concept to compare to it. I'm not sure I fully connect them with each other anymore, though. I don't really think of them as Kishimoto's characters now, I think of them as yours. Like they might've been those people long ago, but too much tragedy occured, driving them to who they are now.

Anyways, I'm proud of you, you're awesome, keep it up! That's the best way to describe how I feel about this fiction, seriously.