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for Kyuubi Kronicles

by megladon129

schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you decide to continue up dating this.
person Ravnwyng
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was/is AWESOME! I love this fic! I'd try to explain how much, but words fail me. I can hardy wait for the next chapter!
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
person Kyuubi Fanatic
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kool so far, please update on naruto's predicament soon ^_^
person lain
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh...oh...I like it very, *very* much. *all hail* Wow, I've read everything you have to offer and I'm continuously amazed! You have such talent and passion! Eep! I'm getting sidetracked. Back to me actually reviewing the story, *ahem* I think you portrayed Naruto and Kyuubi's personality perfectly!!! Naruto rocks when the Kyuubi is resurfaced! He's so powerful! *o* [in awe] Tsunade is incredible! She's hilarious fighting with Kyuubi, and I love how Kyuubi knows Tsunade. The way you write makes me think that things like that actually happen in the series! SO FEW FANFICTION WRITERS CAN DO THAT! Anyways, I'm not quite sure when you wrote this, or if you plan on updating, I just hope you do...and sooner rather than later. *whimpers/whines at your feet*

*showers you with hugs/pocky/yaoi/and anything else your heart desires*
Lots of love
~la!n
person S.
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH! THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I can't believe you haven't written it since 2004! It's incredible! PLEASE, PLEASE, *PLEASE* write more! It's amazing! Having Kyuubi surface because of Ino's technique was pure genius! And then using the Hyuuga Clan's submission seal to control the Kyuubi--you are seriously a genius! I can't believe this, it was incredible! PLEASE WRITE MORE! *cries*
person yuurimaoh
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This one was getting so good, too! *winces* Now I really DO have nothing more to read...why do I do this to myself!? But, I love the idea of the fox demon being out and in control! Almost as much as the kiss he planted on Sakura! Sasuke's expression was priceless! Please update...on ANY of them! ^_^
person Rachael
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like you. You're writing is wondrous. This is fascinating as all get out and I hope you continue. I was surprised that Kyuubi seemed to have such a sense of humor, though I was so entertained I can't say that I think it's a big deal. Plus I'm not all the way through the manga yet so I really wouldn't know what Kyuubi is like; it's just that from reading other fanfics, he didn't seem the type to say boob-lady (lol at that, so I did), but I really can't complain because I like it. It seemed a little weird to me that Tsunade was just going to send him home. It almost felt like she wasn't terribly concerned about getting Naruto back. It felt *wrong* somehow. Like when I'm editing an essay and I know that there is something missing from a sentence but I can't quite figure out what. The aesthetic isn't right. *snorts* I suppose that's not terribly helpful, but maybe you can reread it and see what you think. Also, were Sasuke and Sakura in the office at the time where Kyuubi is bound to the steel, er, thingy? I can't remember. You really only give Tsunade's reactions to Kyuubi when he pretends to be Naruto. What are the other people in the room thinking or doing? And how is Ino? That feels like a loose end right now.

Thank you for your wonderful stories! I just hope I've given a decent review in return.
person Kitty Silver
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;3 Rawr! Good stuff. Although most of the people from Naruto's year had already passed the Chunin exams the only ones (thus far in the manga) that didn't are Naruto and Sasuke. :D I can give if you want?
person Mana
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ammaaazin. And exciting! Aaah, I can't wait for the next part. And I do hope there is one ^^!