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for Kyuubi Kronicles

by megladon129

person Anon
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
W00t!! Love the story update soon onegai!
person NicoCHna
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SOOOO GOOOODD! Seriously. I am in love witht his fic! It's so well written!! Kyuubi is SOOOOOO COOOL! ^_^ He's neat!
I love you. Please, write more faster! ^_^
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginning. I love that line, "Kyuubi no Kitsune is back!" Wonderful. Now how is the rest of it going to happen. Does Naruto keep in enough control as to not go and rampage the area? Is there a way for Naruto to regain control? What about how people are going to react to this? Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
person dilanda
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude. that's awesome!
person hogo-chan
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowie.... just... wowz. NICE! please update super fast! I NEED to know what happens! *jumps up and down shouting "Tell Me Tell Me Tell ME!"* thanks for writing this! it sounds like this is gonna be a really great fic!
person GreenLady
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy CRAP! That was one hell of a cliffhanger! So if Kyubi's in charge, where did Naruto get to? Is he buried in his own body or still trapped in Ino's? I love your writing style, by the way. Very smooth, and everyone feels in character, which I always appreciate. Also interesting that you decided Team 7's still in the process of taking the Chuunin exam. Usually future fics involve them quickly passing. This is a nice change. I hope to see more soon!
person Stranj100
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what cliffhanger. I want more now.
person clowangel
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* ... *blinks again* OH MY GODDESS! Kyuubi-san got set free! O_O; DAMN INO! What did you do?!

Continue soon okay? ^^ Loving it!
person NicoChan
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good!! Wow! The characteraztion is great, and you didn't only focus on the males (even though it's a M/M...Good.^^) I like the concept, and I may have read it somewhere once before. I wonder if something like that could happen in the show....it would be scary.^^
person Kirei Kitsue
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo!

hehehehehe ghostninja you silly kid! First, Tsunade is the GOdaime Hokage (go=5) and ROKUdaime stands for Sixth Hokage. And secondly, the neither of the words Hokage or Sandaime appear in the story. *laughs* what a silly kid you are, but it's forgivable I suppose.

Now, to review the actual story!

GREAT JOB! I love the way you portray the characters. You've got Sasuke right on. And Naruto, too! Kyuubi is going to be soooooo much fun to read!! I love how he was all maniacal at the end and the words, "Kyuubi no Kitsune... is back!" That just cracked me up! I can't wait to see how the village handles Kyuubi's release.

Words of Sarcasm for the day: "Way to go, Ino!" *mutters* Idiot girl... but hey, how was she supposed to know? I mean, really?

Update soon or Pharoh will feed you to Anpu (AKA - Kitty)! *giggles*