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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! The only thing I am going to be nazi about is your use of Japanese, which is not entirely correct in some places. But the smut made up for it. :D~ I hope you are thinking of writing another kakairu.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's bloody excellent!
Wuvvv this!
The way you built it up, the innocence of Iruka... oh it was so wuvly and great and oh oh I love it! You write beautifully! LOVE YOU!
When I log in, thbis is going on my favs.!
Tsx
Wuvvv this!
The way you built it up, the innocence of Iruka... oh it was so wuvly and great and oh oh I love it! You write beautifully! LOVE YOU!
When I log in, thbis is going on my favs.!
Tsx
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You are just endlessly talented. *is jealous* GREAT fic! Sexy Kakashi and cute Iruka uke = happy Inazuma ^_^ Thank you!
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This so begs for a sequel! I wanna see Naruto's reaction if he walked in on them naked, or even worse, having sex! The ultimate horror - seeing your parents in the act! Anyways, it's a cute story! Totally aaaww inspiring! Good job!
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was very long, but not just with sex, lots of fuzzy feelings and romance too.
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this -- extremely clever and well written. Very kawaii, too...keep up the good work!!!
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*tries to catch her breath again*
... Wow ... I´m speechless. Really.
As a tremendously huge fan of this pairing [who has read a fair share of the KakaIru-(fan-)literature out there], I can clearly state that I rarely stumbled upon a (lemon-)story that manages to absorb (and entertain ^_-) me in a similar intriguing manner like this wonderful, incredibly well written piece of fanfiction does.
The way you describe the emotions and interaction between those two is both beautiful, intensive and yet so much in-character, without ever becoming vulgar, corny or stereoptypical. In short: I just 'love' it. ^_^
Hope you will devote your outstanding talent to the creation of more KakaIru stories in the future. That would really make my world go round. ^__^
... Wow ... I´m speechless. Really.
As a tremendously huge fan of this pairing [who has read a fair share of the KakaIru-(fan-)literature out there], I can clearly state that I rarely stumbled upon a (lemon-)story that manages to absorb (and entertain ^_-) me in a similar intriguing manner like this wonderful, incredibly well written piece of fanfiction does.
The way you describe the emotions and interaction between those two is both beautiful, intensive and yet so much in-character, without ever becoming vulgar, corny or stereoptypical. In short: I just 'love' it. ^_^
Hope you will devote your outstanding talent to the creation of more KakaIru stories in the future. That would really make my world go round. ^__^
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it ^-^ Aa~ the things that i miss out on as a result of only hanging around fanfiction.net..very hot, and i'm very glad you decided to drag on the bed scene. youve made me a very happy fangirl.
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... wow. Very well written, nice plot, characters very very far from OOC... great work, really.
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the pairing, it is one of my favorites. You did a good job with the characters. Well thought out and everything. Keep up the good work.
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