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by Klepto

person HyperBlueKitten
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So short and yet so hot and errotic, I love it, 5/5!!! ^~^
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That was poetic.
person Seisai
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... That is hot... Perfect title by the way!

Seisai
person Melancholy
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot...Like it ^_^
person Saru
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For some reason or another, when people write SasuNaru fics detailed... they seem to lose any character about them. I mean, Sasuke yelling "My dear sweet Naru-chan!", just sounds messed up. That's why this fic was perfect. It might have been short, but it didn't have anything taking away from it. It was what it was, and I like simple fics like that. It's just sad that they can't be longer...
person Emina
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I liked it, so much even, I might even post it up on my blog(xanga) so other SasuNaru fans might see your greatness
lol I'm not kidding*, for some reason it had this particular feeling to it, a nice one though.
So Props to you for writing something worth me taking time outta my day to type out a review ^_^

(*and I will do it, I've done it several times before with other fanworks from various author's, and I credit you, OF COURSE, I'm not selfish like that...)
person Emina... again.
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved how it all played out... in a nice simplistic sorta way.

Yup, this is DEFINTELY going on my blog :nods:

^_^ yay, I got first reviews, that must count for SOMETHING.... (j/k, of course)
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. You could make into a long story. Nice story. coolsa.
person lo
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot. Nice little piece of fiction. for something so short.