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But Naruto doesn't scar at all, even at the valley of the end after the loss in the hospital he didn't have any scars. The only ones are on his face and I asume that is from the Kyuubi. anyways, coolsa.

Hmmn.. a lemon would definitely be good. ^-^

OOOOHHHH I love this story!!! I can't wait for more of it *giggles with glee* come one Sasuke and Naruto! well I wanted to ask you something. I was wondering if would be alright if I did a pick with Sasuke, Naruto and Yahiko(spelling?) together. I really would love to do it, and it would be fun to do a cute family piccy like that. but I'm wondering if Sasuke still looks the same. and if you want I'll send the scetch before I color it. thanks for reading catch you on the flip side later
~Mayzen

oops I forgot I want to put link in there too even though I'm usually not good with animals ^.^; later
~Mayzen

This such a grat fic i can't get enough of it i couldn't belive that you just stoped and left the readers like that your sooo mean!

No, but really this is a very geat story you should really continue it. very exciting I can't wait to see what happens next

so update soon okay UNTIL NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!!!

OMG is this a kawaii fic or what??? Yahiko is just soo sweet!!! ok so whats the deal with sasuke? he fell in love with naru-chan before leaving ne? and then almost got married to that girl dana cuz she reminded him of naru ne ne? ano sa ano saa then thatll mean in a kinda weird way that sasu-chan had a kid with a naru female look alike.... anyways yahiko is too cute and it is soo great that naru-chan and sasu-chan can have a kid that is blood related (remember the whole bonding thing between yahiko and link) when they get together YAY!!! i just love this fic!!! plz update soon!!!! =^o^=

update soon please this is such a cool story and we ahve only had one bit of NaruSasu so please write more.

Wonderful fic. ^__^ I especially like how you're giving Naruto and Sasuke a kid without resorting to mpreg. At the beginning, I thought Yahiko was Itachi's child, which means I was completely thrown for a loop when I found out otherwise.

The battle scene where Sasuke was fighting the kids was quite impressive. It flowed much like watching an episode, which can be hard to do and doesn't always work.

I think my favorite thing about this whole fic is how Yahiko and Link (Zelda fans unite!) have the mental link. I've never seen it before in a Naruto fic (Kyuubi and Naruto conversations aside) and it's refreshingly original.

Can't wait for the next chapter. ^^ Keep up the good work.

Cecilia Tsukineko

PS - Hmmm... Your description of Sasuke's fiancee... Looking for a Naruto replacement, was he? *evil giggles*

Wow, awesome story. I love that the kid Naruto adopted turned out to be Sasuke's son. With wierd coincidence on top of wierd coincidence the story has turned really interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter, PLEASE update soon!

*snickers* I love the way naruto greeted Sasuke. Love this story so far.