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oh god... please... not the little fox!! nyah!!! Please!! T.T
I want into that list please... nekochanme2@yahoo.com Thank you!

Oh wow that was kinda evil :), and I was kinda hoping that they would get to meet Sasuke but it was pretty nice anyway, I really hope the kid is okay, til next time, Ja ne.

AWESOME story !!
I love it and I hope you update it soon!!

Lovely!!! Lovely!!! I knew he was Sasuke's kid! Nyah!!! me likes!!!! nyah!!!! I hope everything comes out right!! I like this story a lot and the characters are very believable... nyah! This is rapidly becoming a favorite...

Yahiko may be my favorite OC ever. There are sometimes things that he does that aren't very five-year-old like, and I would've originally placed him as at least ten. However, this is the Naruto-verse, where children (the prodigies anyway) canbecome full-fledged ninja under the age of ten. There are some things that are confusing, but I'd need to look at the first chapter again before I could offer constructive criticism. One of the things I'm wondering about--Is Sasuke with Orochimaru at the present or isn't he? I'm pretty sure there's something in the first chapter about that but I can't remember what it is for the life of me.

Yahiko is really selling this piece for me and I hope to see more awesome Naruto and Yahiko interactions--everything from training to eating to naptimes would be awesome! Looking forward to the next chapter,

mydarkerside

nyah... cool... sounds like the kid's sasuke and his lover's... That the bastard brother killed the girl and kept the child... before abandoning him as soon as his brother left the snake... ne? that would make lots of sense given your story... In that case... I wonder what Sasuke, Naruto and Itachi will say when they get to know where the kid is... nyan! cool!!!

Hey, I'm new here, so far I like it. I get the impression from your summary and the amount of reviews that there's a whole lot more of this that's already written, so YAY, does that mean really fast updates? If not is there anywhere I can still read the story in it's entirety? Cause I kinda wanna read the rest NOW :D!!

Intense... great start... I almost cant wait to see what's next... It really kept me on my toes, the tension, the fear, the distrust... it was all a rush... so please continue!

GAh! It's been a long time since I've been desperate to see a fic updated by chapter 1!! Usually I wait a few chapters, but this...this! This is very intriguing and I really want to know what is going to happen next. It's really good. I love likkle chibi children getting mixed up into everything. And so long as Sasuke isn't dead, I think I'm really, really, really going to like this fic.

Personal homage to Kenshin!!! *bows* LoVE it! This kid doesn't quite strike me as a Yahiko, but then again, that's okay, because it's a new Narutoverse kid (one I happen to be very fascinated with). The homage is appreciated by this one, that it is.

I hope that you update soon, though I think I'll be keeping my eye on this one regardless.

hhhm where to start
I hate cliff hangers but what’s life with out a little suspense *grins*
But I will also give a crack at giving constructive criticism (since you asked )
Some spots move to slow that you almost lose the reader umm in the beginning of the story when Sasuke is meeting his son or looking at a photo it’s a little confusing because you got into hair color and sound like Yahiko had blond hair the rest of the time its black …..
*blushes* hope that’s not to mean …. I don’t do mean
But so far I like the story and wish to read it to the end
Keep up the good work