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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY I LOVE YOUR STORY and I believe I would love to be added to your mailing list... Thank you for writing and posting such talent should not go to waste!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i really love this story! please send me stuff ^^
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
srry i forgot to include my email the4thzoro22@netscape.net
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You wrote "The human nose is highly sensitive to the smell of come, and Naruto was exception to this little fact."
I think you meant "...' and Naruto was NO exception to this little fact."
Other than that this is very well written. I really like it.
I hope you are planning on continuing it. If you are continuing it I would like to be added to your mailing list.
My e-mail is solaris_night@sailormoon.com
thankyou
I think you meant "...' and Naruto was NO exception to this little fact."
Other than that this is very well written. I really like it.
I hope you are planning on continuing it. If you are continuing it I would like to be added to your mailing list.
My e-mail is solaris_night@sailormoon.com
thankyou
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack where is the rest! MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! Please email me when you continue with the story!!! <3
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May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. It is well written and the plot moves at a wonderfully enticing pace, not too fast and not too slow. The two children are brilliant, and I seem to hate Itachi more than usual now. A very interesting twist, having them with Gaara. I for one, hope that Sasuke and Naruto confront and destroy Itachi sometime in this story, with maybe a little help from that good old Scary Panda. ;)
The NaruSasu is moving at what seems to be the perfect place, as you do not rush it and thereby make it unbelieveable, but develop the entire thing and raise it to a higher pedestal in this manner.
I would be honoured if you would add me to the mailing list that you mentioned in the bottom of the last chapter.
With that said, goodbye for now.
The NaruSasu is moving at what seems to be the perfect place, as you do not rush it and thereby make it unbelieveable, but develop the entire thing and raise it to a higher pedestal in this manner.
I would be honoured if you would add me to the mailing list that you mentioned in the bottom of the last chapter.
With that said, goodbye for now.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing story! I like the flow and the buildup of suspense and complications. Can't wait to read more!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I really like this fic! You plan to continue writing it, right? Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more in the future.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh I am soooo loving this and I would love to be on your mailing list!!! Great job so far Cant wait for more!! I love the boys!! and poor Gaara ... baby sit!!! haha that should be interesting!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that is so cruel to make Yahiko leave his family. So not cool. *mutters darkly about Itachi's demise* ahem, anyway, i really enjoyed reading this, i stayed up all night reading it, all 12 chapters, just because it was that good. i would very much appreciate it if you would add me to you mailing list. Anyways, take it easy, ja ne.