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ooh I soooo love this fic, soo diffrent and unique, great detail and plot line..in case you are wondering I barely found this fic today as I scroll threw the fics, Im a newbie fan to Naruto and have become obsessed with them lol, and I soo like Sasu/Naru or vice versa pairs, and the brother thing is totally great, I am wondering if you will be updating this anytime soon? I got to chap 12 and wanted to cry, Ive been reading it non stop since I found it and now I feel...empty lol as wierd as that sounds, I must have more, I hope you update soon, and if you still have that mailing list thing I would really appreciate it if you would add me to it so I can know when you update this wonderful fic, till then thank you for that great read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

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hewwo. i think you've created an excellent story here. i just love the 2 new characters you have decided to add to the Naruto family. they are so adorable!! ^^ so update soon cuz i'll be expecting it ASAP! and watever an aff mailing list is, add me to it! i included my email in the email section.. heh. update soon!

I love this so much But I need Itachi dead I hate that basterd detroying the famlily-ness. Grrrrrrr well is there going to be a lemon or at least a citrus yet god I'm dying lol no more solo's
well update soon please add to list teehee

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hm your soo mean hahah poor gaa-chan hehe baby sitting hm.............wonder if he is going to die in the proses XD anyway haha sasuke you ECHII no perv thoughts now XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD anyway it would be a honor to be in your mailing list X3 and great work whit the chaps anyway try to write the next chapter know ok bye and write more ^v^

Gaara babysitting... *snickers* There's a first. And MEEP! *Not* liking where Itachi's thoughts are going... Bad enough that he scared the crap outta poor Yahiko... *Bounces* Can't wait until the next chapter!

YAY! An update! Aw, this chapter was short! I liked the speech that Kankuro gave the kids. That was a nice a nice touch! I was surprised though, that upon hearing of thier childrens' disappearance, Naruto, at least, didn't want to rush off right away to find them. It just seemed like an odd reaction for a parent to have. And Sasuke! Shame on him! Not caring if his son was missing? I understand his apathy though, it is suited to his character in this story. I, personally, would like to see things get a little more emotionally in depth with the characters. I know I KNOW, I'm one of the bastards that always gives you a hard time about getting to the sex, but without the emotional struggle of the charaters, the story would lose its weight. Anyway, this seems like a transitional chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing where you are planning to go with this down the line. NYA! and Gaara with little kids! What a great way to have some fun with his character! Those mischievious boys...and Gaara! *giggles with anticipation*

Good, good! I see that some of the things I told you last time are taking. You explained some things in this chapter more than you did before, but it's still kinda vague. Other than that, great job. I hope you continue to write this story and continue to improve in said writing. Arigato Gozaimasu. ^_^!

Hey there! This was an excellent chapter! I liked Gaara's interaction with the boys. A little Naruto and Sasuke action was also really great! Nice little cliffhanger there, with Itachi...overall, great chapter, it was a really nice read, and as always, I will eagerly await your next update!

I really liked this chapter. I'm glad Sasuke decided his family was more important than his revenge. I haven't read your edits of previous chapters so forgive me if this question has been fixed/corrected in the earlier chapter: but I thought the boys couldn't communicate through thoughts anymore? Did they just think they couldn't? Or did you go back and fix it? Or do I just not know what hell I'm talking about? lol Let me know if I'm wrong. And I'd be honored if you put me on your mailing list.