rate_review Reviews

Great fanfic... The plot is just really good, and the idea of the two son is very interesting. I hope you didn't stop writing, you HAVE to end it...
Did you planned to elaborate some interaction between Sasuke and Naruto about Yahiko's mother ? Ho, and by the way, Gaara's coming is just GREAT... He kick asses^^.
I look forward to the next chapter

MOREEEE MOOREEEEEEEE WRITE MOREEEEEEEEEEEE

I enjoyed reading your fanfic. Some parts of the story were rather vague and I believe it would be better if you explained more on some things, but this is your story-not mine. Although, I wish Sasuke and Naruto would suck it up and hot dog(or fox) sex already, I'm not going to push it. Domo Arigato for writing this story.

Humm... It's difficult to review really good stories. When there are no mistakes to point out or something like that the review often degenrate to a simple "Hooray..." statement.

And it's the same with your story. I really like the idea of the two little sons and their interactions are well described. Your descicion to don't use Japanese terms in to an extent many other authors tend to is something I really appreciate. Your style is simple, easy to read (especially for people like me, whose native tongue is not English) - nonetheless very graphic. Mhhh... I really cannot think a thing that bothered me in this fic - sorry ;-))

I don't know what purpose this mailing list has - but I want to try it, so would you be so kind and add me there? Thanks :-)

So long,
Nathaniel

nice update! thanks! ^_^

hmm i wonder if Gaara would know that their Naruto's and Sasuke's sons. haha. oh yea about the lemon thingy. i was thinking about like after naruto and sasuke sent yahiko and yutaro to play. cause they were left alone. and then after that they were talking about babies with yutaro. i thought that'd b funny and that it also connects to the story. kinda like behind the scenes. lol haha XD.
and i dont really know wut the mail list is 4. but yet i still wanna b on the list. hahaha XD
anyway my e-mail is - Starmiexangel@aol.com
update soon! n_______n

so awsome I love it but sadly that itachi basterd is still alive gaara should crush him muhahaha ok well thanks for the reminder I loved the chappie but *blushes* will there be any you know limes in the near furture for our fav couple please lol well update soon

Arry

Hey, this was fantastic! Another great chapter! Yay Gaara! I really liked this, I am curious to see what's going to happen with the boys...will Sasuke and Naruto get the news soon? Will Uncle Shika find them? Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great work!

yes, heat up the relationship!! XDD anyways, that's for the e-mail on letting me kno when it was updated!! XDD so gaara found them, what will he do? update soon!!

Nice chapter, but a bit rushed, I mean many things happen, but almost no feelings are mentioned.
I'm a bit disaponted... Especially because there were so many really dramatic moments for most characters!
Especially for 'dads', when thay realized the boys' escape...
But maybe you'll insert that in the next chapter??
Well anyway, I liked it nontheless and put me on your mailing list, please! I love your writing!