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Hey man awsome chap. GAARA'S Da bomb diggity.

P.S. PLEASE add me to the list!!!

I love this fic!
Very cute OC's, and I love that both Naruto and Sasuke have sons now. Also! I know who the next character appearing will be! Gaara right?

yatta!!! XD another great one!, this fic is really good i hope you update soon, and i really wonder when would naru-chan and sasu-chan do the lemon scene together... oh well gambatte! ja! ^_^.

Yay! New chapter! Very good, I liked this one. Punishment is always worse when it involves some sort of chore...blah. Anyways, good chapter, I am excited to see who the new character you're going to introduce is. And the boys are written really well, they act like I would imagine two brothers would...can't wait for the next update!

Gaara!All the warnings about yoai! where ? what interaction,this is a friendship fic posing as shonnen ai.All the kids none of the fun.Ladies have there own pissing rituals,fireman can also be done by girls pinch and go,it is custom women pee sitting down not biology,it takes about two weeks for an adult women to learn to piss and aim standing up.OK?I miss the fox.Itachi will shake things up eh .Here's hoping.There is little to no chemistry between Sasuke and Naruto,I guess I feel ripped off,don't mind me ,I'll get over it.

Mmm, I like this. Please e-mail me when you update.

Hopefully soon will be sooner than the last update, ne? ^^'

*Cough* And about the "fireman" thing... yeah, I don't understand, I frankly, I don't think I *want* to understand... ^^;;;;

And meep, Itachi! Uh ohhhh... this is *not* good... And poor Yutaro... and Yahiko. *Sigh* Idiots, both of them. Silly boys... And of *course* the boys would finish right then! Its a requirement for kids to interrupt their parents' private moments! Hell, kids have a sixth sense about that sorta thing... heh... So soon Itachi will come out from hiding again. ^^' This won't be pretty, no doubt... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Well hell yeah! I hope he aint dead either! *Cries hard* Damn stupid Kishimoto san and his villanous murdering!! GAAA! someone needs to chain him up and...OH! heh sorry! well i was happy to see that you FINALLY updated! *Squee!* Itachi...grrr...what could that bastard be planning? heh, guess i'll have to wait and see. the bathroom scene...*snort* fireman...LOL... And darn it! Naruto and Sasuke were about to have moment! And those frisky little kids had to come and interupt them! GAAA! You like torture don't you?
I can't wait to see what you have planned concerning Gaara! and also, Naughty Itachi's naughty plans!
BE SWIFT! TYPE LIKE LIGHTNING!! RETURN SOON!
I shall be waiting...
d(^-^)b

that was a very good chapter i really enjoyed reading it can't wait for the next one so keep up the good work

I love it, Chapter 9 and now begins the main story. Priceless. I can't wait to see what else you've got cooking.