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Wow...wow...did I mention wow? I am really enjoying your story. The plot is great so far. I love what you did with Link/Yutaro, it will be interesting to see what happens with the new family dynamic... I will be eagerly waiting a new chapter!!!

I like how Naruto doesn't completely trust Sasuke, yet. It's more realisitic that way. I'm looking forward to their talk, since I like seeing the emotions of a character come out. Can't wait for the next installment.

I think i found a spelling error...“I don’t know what’s wrong, but we can ask Naruto ((of)) Baa-chan about it later.” Is that supposed to be "Or"? (just confused me a little)

anyway the addition of Naruto's new son certainly heats things up! I sense a lot of possible tension occuring...and Itachi is back in the picture! Ugh oh. I wonder what Sasuke will do when he finds out!! (KILL KILL KILL!) hahaha! I like that you didn't leave yutaro/link's name the way it was, (Every time i read it i, for some reason, kept picturing a cute little elven boy in a green dress and tights! Yum!) It must be really strange for the kid to suddenly be human...are you planning on having the boy display more 'ferral' tendancies, since he was a fox? And does the boy have 'demon' chakra as well? Is he more like a 'demon baby'? What will everyone else think of Naruto's new bouncing baby boy??? Man! you sure did leave it at a troublesome spot!!! sigh...i'll be waiting for more of course...so...be nice and keep churning it out! Hahaha! Naurto/Sasuke...i can not wait to see how they resolve thier past differences and take on their "fatherly" roles....BTW nice way to give both of them kids and not have to include a troublsome woman or a pregnant man! Squee!! Oh yeah...i hope that if you plan on having Itachi kidnap or kill one of those boys, you will also be including the part where he is tortured and beaten and kept as pet in the basement! hahaha! Don't mind me...i'm okay...really. d(^-^)b

I hope you kill Itachi and I want a lemon tear can you update sooner than last time please lol
well great story of course

aryy

oh on what's itachi going to do!?! Really interesting fic. Yay, i love sasu/naru fics!! They both have sons now, so cute!! anyways, update soon!!

no! not itachi! *poses dramatically* great job! i'm so happy you updated! I love this story! it was so sad though, those poor boys! But thats okay! And there was so little sasunarunesss... oh well. hopefully there will be a whole lot more really soon! Keep up the great work! Your awesome! ^_~

Well, I only made it through 2 chapters and I have to go to work now, so I'll read the rest tomorrow. But so far, I am really interested in where this is going. Can't wait to read more. I'll review again once I've finished the rest you have posted. But it sure has a great start!

It's about time you updated.
;)
I love this story. You're doing a great job on it.

finally, an update! *giggle* I like the Kenshin reference. I looove Kenshin. XD

Anyway, great chapter! XD

I just about died laughing when Naruto gave Link the name Yutaro. The competition between those two in RK always had me in stitches... I also loved the fact that Yahiko actually responded to Sasuke's efforts to comfort him. Yay, progress! And *yes*, Naruto and Sasuke need to talk. Seriously... And GAH! Itachi! Ohhh dear... can't help but wonder what shit you're planning to put the four through now. ^^' I eagerly await the next chapter!