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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story since it started. Though I found it at FanFiction.net, I had to come read the Lemony goodness over at AFF. I love the storyline and the way you've been going in it. Keep it up. Oh, wouldn't mind that side story either ;).
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol when yahiko asked shikarmaru questions at the party. curious to find out whats going to happen next.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome please update soon I LOVE THIS STORY alot and I hope theres a lemon soon lol
loves arry
loves arry
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(2) It appears that Iruka and Kurenai were on the same team with Ebisu (inferred from the cover of manga chapter 250).
Actually you're incorrect. The cover of 250 is Iruka, Ebisu and Suzume. The Inane translation says it on the page itself. Also if you go to narutofan.com you'll see Suzume listed in character biographies. I didn't know who she was until looking there and going back into the manga. Suzume was Ino and Sakura's teacher who was teachine kinoichi how to be both feminine and yet still ninja.
But that factoid aside... I do like your story and look forward to reading more of it. I can't say I was thrilled with Sasuke's teaching of his son. He needs to stop that Uchibas do it better crap or he really will fall under the Uchiba curse/trap of disappointing their children. Shikamaru being forced to think about the implications of Naruto and Sasuke as something more than friends or rivals was pretty amusing.
Actually you're incorrect. The cover of 250 is Iruka, Ebisu and Suzume. The Inane translation says it on the page itself. Also if you go to narutofan.com you'll see Suzume listed in character biographies. I didn't know who she was until looking there and going back into the manga. Suzume was Ino and Sakura's teacher who was teachine kinoichi how to be both feminine and yet still ninja.
But that factoid aside... I do like your story and look forward to reading more of it. I can't say I was thrilled with Sasuke's teaching of his son. He needs to stop that Uchibas do it better crap or he really will fall under the Uchiba curse/trap of disappointing their children. Shikamaru being forced to think about the implications of Naruto and Sasuke as something more than friends or rivals was pretty amusing.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHH you have to update soon!!!! I wanna see 'em get together!!!! ^__^;;
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT was soooo good. *frowns at Naruto and Sasuke* Come on you two. Oh well the way to love is hard. I can't wait for the next chappy! and Itachi appears oooohh Kick his BUTT! ANYONE! later ^.^
~Mayzen
~Mayzen
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! AN UPDATE AT LAST!!! i can't wait to see what's gunna happen next!! HAHAHA! he said 'boobies'!!!! nice touch! Hope your hand gets better soon so you can get the next chapter out!!! *glomp*
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wowie! that was super awesome! and that whole thing about Yahiko's "paws" hurting was really clever! great job! I understand about the whole lemon thing but it would be so frickin' awesome if naruto and sasuke could say "to hell with it!" and just go at it like little bunnies with reckless abandon! XD *sighs wistfully* but i suppose that is asking too much! thank you for updating! this chapter really was awesome! keep up the good work!
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww i hope your hand heals good and i can't wait till the next chappy ^.^
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor baby! I hope it doesn't hurt too much! what a pain in the ass... I mean hand... that must be! take your time! we'll still love you even if it takes awhile to update!