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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh geez, that was the best ShikaIno fic I have ever read before. Congrats on such a great story. ^_^ I didn't like the yaoi implications though, and I was hoping that you could give us readers a warning next time.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really good! I really enjoyed reading it. I'm totally going to ready anything else you've done.
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um...
This was slightly bizarre...since when do these people farm? I mean, don't get me wrong, it was written well, but, um, farming? I thought they were ninjas...
And what's up with the deer craze? Your whole story was like, "Shikamaru learned sex from da deer!" I was like, ew. He watches the deer mate? Ok, Shikamaru apparently has weird fetishes.
And, uh, yeah. Truly a, er, interesting story. Nice, hawt at the end (hawter if it didn't have that DEER aspect to it...), but yeah. Nice job?
This was slightly bizarre...since when do these people farm? I mean, don't get me wrong, it was written well, but, um, farming? I thought they were ninjas...
And what's up with the deer craze? Your whole story was like, "Shikamaru learned sex from da deer!" I was like, ew. He watches the deer mate? Ok, Shikamaru apparently has weird fetishes.
And, uh, yeah. Truly a, er, interesting story. Nice, hawt at the end (hawter if it didn't have that DEER aspect to it...), but yeah. Nice job?
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Long, well-written, and a great ending. You did a wonderful job of setting up a great secenario in just one long chapter...could have easily been stretched into a multi-chapter series, but was a great standalone as well. I love how well you kept Shikamaru in character, and you had some great insight on how he'd act in a relationship as well.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you must write a sequal!!! its soooooo goood!!!!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this is so cute i love it! <3
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did a very, very, VERY good job with this fic! ShikIno lurve = good, kawaii lurve. And it all ended well, ne? Thank you for one nice sitting (of reading). ^_^
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was lovely! I love the way you wrote their personalities, and the interactions between the two of them were perfect. And the little scene with Kiba was hilarious! ^^
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like the way you make Shikamaru and Ino! This fic really portrays their character and how they could be like as a couple. Wonderful job! ^o^
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really good :) props for a great fic.