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Oh, poor childs!(Yes, I know that's not a word, but I have an OC who would actually say that about Naruto and Sasuke...) I was crying alot in these last chapters and I couldn't beleive it! I don't cry alot, 'cause I'm a strong girl but you all made the story kinda, okay I know this'll sound alittle- okay alot chessy but, the story just seemed to come alive. Ya know? Like, the words just jump of the page and hit ya! *touches both hands to heart and bows head slightly* I got the meaning of the title just alittle before Tsunades talk with Jiraya about that scroll. Tsh. Figures. *chuckles* Nice work with the story so far and good luck with the rest!

I love your story. They are going to find Hisoka right? And soon right? They have to find her!

Will Sasuke eventually come to terms with how he feels and pay more attention to his son. Or doesn't he realize that there are some scary similarities. HIs father favored Itachi, He favors Hisoka. His mother favored him, Naruto favored Hikaru. Doesn't Sasuke realize he's setting his soon up to turn out like him. I thought he wanted his son not to make his mistakes.

......where is Hisoka?! It depresses me!

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Please update this story. When I started reading it I couldn't stop. I have to find out what happened to Hisoka. Poor Sasuke I feel so sorry for him.

I found this today, absolutely love it and the nearly cried when I realised that it hasn't been updated since last year.

I really hope that you will update this one day, hopefully soon :D because it is amazing and captivating and definately deserves to be completed. Anyway, I hope you'll get the inspiration to continue this soon.

Also, if you don't mind? When (lol notice my lack of using IF!!! XD )you do update, if possible could you let me know? My email is tenshiofdoom@gmail.com

*bows* thank you, loved your fic, and keep writing such fantastic stories!

are you ever going to update 'Reflections & Shadows'

write another chapter~! aiee its so good.

OMG plz update.........i really want to know did Hisoka is really dead or she alive somewhere....plz i need to know...

FINNALLY someone argees with me about the marrying young thing. Too many fan fic authors don't think about how the real ninja society has to be able to work in order to function! Thanks!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON^^