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OH MY GOD YOU GUYS ARE SOOOOOOOOO EVIL! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'VE LEFT US HANGING LIKE THIS. I SWEAR TO GOD IF THAT SLIMLY BASTARD TAKES NARUTO'S AND SASUKE'S BABIES AWAY I'LL HUNT HIM DOWN AND KILL HIM SLOWLY UNITLL HE BEGS FOR DEATH!!!!!!! *BREAKS PENCIL IN HALF IMAGINING IT'S KABUTO'S NECK* ON THAT NOTE, AMAZING STORY! I'M FREAKIN' LOVIN THIS FIC, NORMALLY MPREG STORIES AREN'T MY THING CAUSE THERE REALLY FAR OUT THERE AND SO UNBELIEVABLE BUT YOUR STORY COULD POSSISBLE HAPPEN WHICH MAKES IT TOTALLY ROCK. I LOVE YOU GUYS FOR WRITING US SUCH A GREAT SASUNARU STORY AND PLEASE DON'T KEEP US WAITING TO LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

-stares speechless- why that no good mother freakin bastard -rambles on and on bot kabuto and orichimaru- not the babys!!!!!!! lol cant wait for more im..curious as to what will happen kukukukukuku

HOLY SHIT man !why? man i really hope sasuke and naruto kill that snake bastard damn hes annoying as hell well great chapter keep up the great work and update soon

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Hehe. I feel for Naruto. Parenthood seems to thwart your libido to hell (unwillingly). Sasuke is an interesting father. I do feel kind of sad that he's more biased towards his daughter than his son, but I suppose that would be a bit expected of him. That may (I suspect) prove to cause a problem when those kids get older (thinks back to forshadowing in earlier chapters). It's good Naruto is there to balance things out. Poor Konohamaru (snicker). As for the ending of this recent chapter, I really can't shake the feeling of this being Karma (looks back at how she ended her latest chapter). Even though, I know that's not the case. (-_-)

Yet another great chapter. (I expect a good snake-bastard barbeque soon.) I look forward to the next update.

~Dirtyangel

Read until chap 4,then you lost me,your writing ability was not a problem but the way you handled the subject matter was way too femmed out for me,I have had a child and I never got that frou frou.Sometimes really feminine stories or things are so femme they cease to be female and are a parody of it,drag,you know?I see lots of pro femme girls and trust me they look more like guys in drag then women.It is turning femme culture(for lack of a better word) into a fetish.Why would they drag him arround and send him to parties if he is supposed to take it easy and avoid suspition? Bad logic.Sorry.Again its content not ability.

UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! PLEEAASSSEEE!!!! MY GOD that wasnt enough pls updae soon i wanna know whatll happen after they took care of the babies!
Great chapter by the way ^_^.

lol, its about damn time. I was wondering if you'd ever update again. Anyhoo, im loving this, so keep up the good work.

...Man, words can't describe how attached I've grown to this fic. I will admit, I was a bit skeptical in the beginning about the whole Naruto being stuck as a girl situation; but you all have handled it so very well. I havent' seen a lot of people do that. I hope that you update soon and wonderful work.

~Dirtyangel

Lol, that sucks! Babies sure are a handful, ne? ^^ I can't wait for the actual chapter -- thanks for the preview, and keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!

i absolutely love your mpreg fic its the best i've read and i cant wait til you update agian. i'm really looking forward to it. please keep up the great work.