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Awww...that was so cute. A boy and a girl. Don't you dare let Orochimaru or Itachi do anything to the happy family!!!
This is such a great story. Keep up the good work!

this is such a wonderful story!!! i ave never read anything like this. its full of humor but at the same time shows real emotions. i feel like all of this is really happening before my eyes whenever i read a new chapter. i hope to see the next one soon. really great plot. i like the orochimaru/akitsuki conflict thing. but is it only orochimaru and the sound that're going to wreak havoc or may i expect itachi in the future? thanks for writing such a wonderful fic.

Gaara as a midwife @_@ Remind that to be my first Naruto fan-art

hmph!! I was waiting an update in ff.net...hehhe....but I must say that this chap is cute!!!! I even look the fanart of the twins!!! so cute!! and I was trying to e-mail you...but it always failed or something like that...I'll just check both ff.net and aff.net for update!!!!! GOOD LUCK!!!!!

I'm sorry for the double review...I forgot to put my e-mail on the first one...

and I agree with jazzy(i think)..as long as I can remember.."himitsu" is the term for secret...uhm..xellos(slayers) used to say "sore wa himitsu desu"--that's a secret...

no offense....^___^;;

Damn Orochimaru is so evil, plotting and planning something really really bad! And twins that's a wonderful surprise.
Yey Naruto.

Umm isn't Himitsu mean secret and not Hisoka?

yosh! that was fast! heheheh pls updte soon cant wait whatll happen next, would orochimaru kidnap one of sasuke's kids? of course he would anway you did good on this one its just a little.. well short i guess since i cant get enough of this fic, post up the next chapter quicky please cause i cant wait to read about sasuke's on coming misery with his children, ja! ^_^.

wonderful!!! XD i love it! although its quite weird for naruto to have babies.. x_x wat a creative plot. =) good job. now update soon or else i'll roar at u. :D... i really was hoping that there would be no action or adventure.. but looking at orochimaru and those bad guys point of view.. it seems that there would be action and adventure.. X_X i dont care as long as u have a happy ending with no cliffys or nebody dying.. orochimaru and the bad guys are an acception though. x.x..;; oki oki! stop keeping me in suspense.. WORK HARDER! *whips you* muahahahhahahhahahahaaaa

*;)

awwww....

oh, and chapter warings, please! my mail is in there, but I repeat: puchuchan@gmail.com

Great fic~! and the twins' pic is so cute~! *melts*

::oops, puddle-me hasn't got vocal chords.... what to do... *pulls out OCs to speak for her*::

Hai-chan: why me? stupid fangirl.... Puddle-Pu over there, who is now glowing pink, wants to say: "great chapter in a great story, please keep up the good work~! And please update soon!" There was more, but I REFUSE to do fangirl-squeals. Guys don't do that. Me in particular.

*Puddle-Pu glares at Hai-chan, before returning to beaming happily at the fic*

>v< SO CUTE!!
But the Orochimaru part kinda ended the moment >.>;;
Can't wait to see Sasuke and Naruto 'enjoy' parenthood^^
Keep up the awesome writin'!!
Update soon^^